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Smoking brings to many illnesses

Smoking brings to many illnesses Akr1

Cigatette smoking harms nearly every organ of the body, causes many diseases and reduces the health of smokers in general. Quitting smoking lowers your risk for smoking related diseases and can add years to your life. Recent researches shows that cigarette smoking causes almost half million deaths each year in the Unitet States. This is nearly one in five deaths. In addition, that perishing from cigarette increased over 50 years in US. In fact, smokers are more likely to develop heart deseases, cancer and other illnesses than non smokers. Smoking causes dominished overall health, increased blood pressure which brings to death. Smoking makes your blood vessels thincer and grow narrower, this makes your heart beat faster and your blood pressure go up. Even passive smokers which smokes five tobaco per day may suffer from that

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