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Smacking children is considered the best form of discipline. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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Smacking is considered one of the sources to teach children discipline. Many believe that among the best ways to upbring little ones with great ethics is “Slape them as punishment on any wrong when they do” – even rank it the best. However, it is not the sole way to be followed since it has side effects in a long run which will be argued in this essay. Off course, the ones who practice corporal punishment is not to just release their frustration or furiousness on children – especially when it comes to parents. They have the logic that since in stage of childhood, no one can understand that what is right and wrong as there is no maturity or a knowledge to persuade for right. Moreover, the littles do not have even the intellect to get advice and practice it accordingly. On other hand, parents are always conscious about their children for raising them well-mannered, well behaved and to inject good qualities in them: a natural fact. Therefore, when no other choice left with them, they go for corporal punishment as physical pain is sensed by anyone irrespective of the maturity level or stage of life. The logics puts forward above could be understood that why “someone adapt smacking as a practice to behave their kids”. However, it is bad in many circumstances. Physical torture sometime makes children medically unfit, torture their emotions, induce fear in their personality and destroy their confidence which might be dangerous; if thought in wide perspective. On record, it exists that those who had been physically tortured in their early stage instead of being guided and groomed through some other form of discipline are short-tempered, revenge-seekers and believe only in physical punishment: when treating someone who did wrong to them or commit any mistake. Having above facts and figures in mind I slightly disagree with logic of considering “smacking” the best form of grooming. This essay argued that those who believe in smacking as the perfect way to upbring the littles might not aware from its long run negative impacts. A slight disagreement has been shown by the writer on basis of his own observation that why “Physical punishment” should not be judged as the best form when it comes to teach good manners and customs to little ones.
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believe that among the
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best
ways to
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upbring
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with great ethics is “
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them as
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punishment
on any
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wrong
when they do”
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–
even rank it the
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best
.
However
, it is not the sole way to
be followed
since it has side effects in a long run which will
be argued
in this essay.

Off course, the
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ones
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who
practice corporal
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punishment
is not to
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just
release their frustration or
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furiousness
on
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children
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–
especially
when it
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comes
to parents. They have the logic that since in stage of childhood, no one can understand that what is right and
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wrong
as there is no maturity or
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a knowledge
to persuade for right.
Moreover
, the
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littles
do not have even the intellect to
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get
advice and practice it
accordingly
. On other hand, parents are always conscious about their
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children
for raising them well-mannered,
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well behaved
and to inject
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good
qualities in them: a natural fact.
Therefore
, when no other choice
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left
with them, they go for corporal
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punishment
as
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physical
pain
is sensed
by anyone irrespective of the maturity level or stage of life.

The logics
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puts
forward above could
be understood
that why “someone
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adapt
smacking as a practice to behave their kids”.
However
, it is
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bad
in
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many
circumstances.
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Physical
torture sometime
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makes
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children
medically
unfit, torture their emotions, induce fear in their personality and
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destroy
their confidence which might be
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dangerous
; if
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thought
in wide perspective. On record, it exists that those
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who
had been
physically
tortured in their early stage
instead
of
being guided
and groomed through
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some
other form of discipline are short-tempered, revenge-seekers and believe
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only
in
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physical
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punishment
: when treating someone
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who
did
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wrong
to them or commit any mistake. Having above facts and figures in mind I
slightly
disagree with logic of considering “smacking” the
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best
form of grooming.

This essay argued that those
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who
believe in smacking as the perfect way to
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upbring
the
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littles
might not aware from its long run
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negative
impacts. A slight disagreement has
been shown
by the writer on basis of his
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own
observation that why
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“Physical
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punishment”
should not
be judged
as the
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best
form when it
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comes
to teach
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good
manners and customs to
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little
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ones
.
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IELTS essay Smacking children is considered the best form of discipline.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
385 words
5.5
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