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Science is treated as an essential subject in any country.

Science is treated as an essential subject in any country. This is because it helps to develop the infrastructure of a nation. Some people believe that many individuals does not choose the science subject in universities in most of the countries. This essay will discuss the major reasons behind why people are not opting science as a subject of study and the results of it on a society. The reasons behind not choosing science subject by many students are, they feel that the subject is really tough for them to study, or they are less interested in that subject. This may be because they could not be able to built imagination power. For example, a Student while going through the topics of electromagnetism and chemical equations is not able to think and solve the problems of it due to lack of imagination in their mind. Hence, science is not the first choice of students because it is boring and hard to study. On the other hand, the effects of it on a society are, there may be very few engineers or professionals left in a country to solve major problems nd to help the nation to drive forward its economy sector. Moreover, there may be only few reasearch in a particular field. and it will effect their infrastructure. For example, the infraastructure projects of a nation like building dams and reservoir require science knowlege. As a result, the economy of a nation can be effected. To sum up,
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subject
in universities in most of the countries. This essay will discuss the major reasons behind why
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people
are not opting
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as a
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subject
of study and the results of it on a society.

The reasons behind not choosing
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science
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subject
by
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many
students are, they feel that the
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subject
is
really
tough for them to study, or they are less interested in that
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subject
. This may be
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because
they could not be able to built imagination power.
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, a Student while going through the topics of electromagnetism and chemical equations is not able to
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think
and solve the problems of it due to lack of imagination in their mind.
Hence
,
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science
is not the
first
choice of students
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because
it is boring and
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hard
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few engineers or professionals
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left
in a country to solve major problems

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help
the
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nation
to drive forward its economy sector.
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only
few
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reasearch
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their infrastructure.
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, the
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projects of a
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nation
like building dams and reservoir require
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knowlege
.
As a result
, the economy of a
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can
be effected
.

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IELTS essay Science is treated as an essential subject in any country.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
248 words
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