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In many countries women and men are working full time. It is therefore, logical for women and men to share household works. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that job opportunities have become much more available for the females now than it used to be before the civilization. The topic of sharing household works and being able for both of the couples to share responsibilities is a controversial topic that been discussed a lot as I can guess between every couple. However, the question: is it logical for them to share responsibilities or not? In this essay, I will mention two view points.

There is no doubt that job opportunities have become much more available for the females This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 than it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 the civilization. The topic of sharing household works and being able for both of the couples to share responsibilities is a controversial topic that been discussed
 a lot as I can guess between every couple. However
, the question: is it logical for them to share responsibilities or not? In this essay, I will mention two view points. 