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Please explain why you chose to apply for YYGS specifically AND why you would be a great fit for the program. What will you contribute to YYGS, and what do you hope to take away from YYGS and bring back to impact your community?

Please explain why you chose to apply for YYGS specifically AND why you would be a great fit for the program. What will you contribute to YYGS, and what do you hope to take away from YYGS and bring back to impact your community? V01O3
After hearing about the experiences of students that had the opportunity to go to the YYGS and extensive research about what the program offered; such as the diversity of students, the instructors, and the sessions were specific things that caught my attention. What I will offer to the YYGS community is my first-hand experience and knowledge about the diverse culture that has my beautiful Mexico. I hope to take away from the YYGS a global perspective of diverse topics like innovation and politics, and use this acquired knowledge to impact my community.
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and extensive research about what the program offered; such as the diversity of students, the instructors, and the sessions were specific things that caught my attention. What I will offer to the
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community is my
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-hand experience and knowledge about the diverse culture that has my
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Mexico. I hope to take away from the
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a global perspective of diverse topics like innovation and politics, and
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use
this acquired knowledge to impact my community.
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IELTS essay Please explain why you chose to apply for YYGS specifically AND why you would be a great fit for the program. What will you contribute to YYGS, and what do you hope to take away from YYGS and bring back to impact your community?

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