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People naturally resist making changes in their lives. What kind of problems can this cause? What solutions can you suggest?

People naturally resist making changes in their lives. What kind of problems can this cause? What solutions can you suggest? wNDE
People generally resist making changes in their lives, although it could cause many problems. This essay will discuss such problems, and suggest some solutions for them. According to the psychologists, people divided into two groups. The first group of people who want to make changes and love to do innovations in their lives. The second group of the people who do not want to make important decisions and they just afraid of sharp turns in the life. Firstly, the main problem to resist making changes is fear of unknown. It means fear from the thing that you do not face ever but you first think about it and you absolutely worry about consequences. For example, if you want to travel around the world, first of all you think about your job then your house and car because you just do not want to lose these things. The solution to this problem is very simple. The obvious answer is, just stop think a lot, relax from the life, watch television, read motivational books or anecdotes from magazines which can be very helpful for you mentally and physically. The second cause to this problem is money which is able to change the life for better or worse. For instance, if a person does not have enough material resources, he will find it difficult to strive from the old to the new. One way to tackle this problem is, to start write down your income and all your expenses, by doing this you can easily control your daily income and you can spend money to necessary things. In summary, it is quite natural for most people to be afraid of doing things differently which makes our lives uninteresting. However, by applying simple solutions, we can make it exciting and more meaningful.
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changes
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problems
. This essay will discuss such
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problems
, and suggest
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some
solutions for them.

According to the psychologists,
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people
divided into two groups. The
first
group of
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people
who
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want
to
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make
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changes
and
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love
to do innovations in their
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lives
. The second group of the
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people
who do not
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want
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decisions and
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afraid of sharp turns in the life.

Firstly
, the main
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problem
to resist making
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changes
is fear of unknown. It means fear from the thing that you do not face ever
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you
first
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think
about it and you
absolutely
worry about consequences.
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want
to travel around the world,
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first of all
you
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think
about your job then your
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house
and car
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because
you
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do not
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want
to lose these things. The solution to this
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very
simple. The obvious answer is,
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stop
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a lot, relax from the life,
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watch
television, read motivational books or anecdotes from magazines which can be
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very
helpful for you mentally and
physically
.

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The
second cause to this
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problem
is money which is able to
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change
the life for better or worse.
For instance
, if a person does not have
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enough
material resources, he will find it difficult to strive from the
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old
to the new. One way to tackle this
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problem
is, to
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start
write down your income and all your expenses, by doing this you can
easily
control your daily income and you can spend money to necessary things.

In summary, it is quite natural for most
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people
to be afraid of doing things
differently
which
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makes
our
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lives
uninteresting.
However
, by applying simple solutions, we can
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make
it exciting and more meaningful.
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IELTS essay People naturally resist making changes in their lives. What kind of problems can this cause? What solutions can you suggest?

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
298 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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