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Owning a car is essential for people who live in rural areas. Discuss this statement.

Owning a car is essential for people who live in rural areas. Discuss this statement. RNq2G
Some people argue that residents that live in far areas from the city centre must have a vehicle to commute between their workplace and home. Having a car is important because a vehicle could save money instead of paying for taxis to reach far places. This essay will firstly, discuss why is it important to have a car to save money. Secondly, this essay will discuss why it can be convenient to own a car than using buses or trains. On the one hand, having a car could certainly limit spending on public transport services every day. Although, public transport services are on the rise of being used as a money-saving method instead of buying a car. In fact, purchasing a car is far from expensive than using taxis and buses. For example, if a person who lives in a rural area, decides to commute to university through trains every day can be pricier than owning a car. Hence, students would need to consider the need of buying a car. On the other hand, a car brings convenience to the person instead of using public transport services. For instance, a person may wait for long hours to reach their workplace by using buses. Buses need to stop at every bus stop to either bring down passengers or load in passengers. Therefore, the person would be late to work by wasting their time only by waiting. In conclusion, acquiring a car is important for people who live in far areas. It can drive them to their work faster. A car can also save money instead of paying for public transport services. However, it is recommended to consider buying a car to commute more easily and quickly.
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Some
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people
argue that residents that
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live
in
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far
areas from the city
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centre
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must
have a vehicle to commute between their workplace and home. Having a
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car
is
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important
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because
a vehicle could save money
instead
of paying for taxis to reach
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far
places. This essay will
firstly
, discuss why is it
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important
to have a
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car
to save money.
Secondly
, this essay will discuss why it can be convenient to
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own
a
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car
than using buses or trains.

On the one hand, having a
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car
could
certainly
limit spending on
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public
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transport
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services
every day. Although,
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public
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transport
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services
are on the rise of being
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used
as a money-saving method
instead
of buying a
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car
. In fact, purchasing a
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car
is
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far
from
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expensive
than using taxis and buses.
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, if a
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person
who
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lives
in a rural area, decides to commute to university through trains every day can be pricier than owning a
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car
.
Hence
, students would need to consider the need of buying a car.

On the other hand
, a
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car
brings convenience to the
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person
instead
of using
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public
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transport
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services
.
For instance
, a
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person
may wait for long hours to reach their workplace by using buses. Buses need to
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stop
at every bus
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stop
to either bring down passengers or load in passengers.
Therefore
, the
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person
would be late to work by wasting their time
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only
by waiting.

In conclusion
, acquiring a
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car
is
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important
for
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people
who
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live
in
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far
areas. It can drive them to their work faster. A
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car
can
also
save money
instead
of paying for
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public
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transport
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services
.
However
, it
is recommended
to consider buying a
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car
to commute more
easily
and
quickly
.
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IELTS essay Owning a car is essential for people who live in rural areas. Discuss this statement.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
285 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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