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overnment should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do agree or disagree with this statement.

overnment should spend money on railways rather than roads. 6xLVG
Better and environment friendly transports are the current requirement for the people. Many types of transports are available around us. Out of all these railways is the better option for the people. I agree to a high extent for more development of the railways. There are many benefits when railways will develop more. Firstly, traffic on the road will decrease dramatically. After the development of the facility in railways people will travel more with trains which will result in a reduction of traffic as well as save the time of travel. Secondly, moving by train is one of the safest ways of transport. As per trend accidents on roads are more than trains, people's death rates are very less when they are traveling with trains as compared to other modes of transport. Finally, road transport is generating more pollution than railways, when people will use rail transport more then pollution will reduce fats. Apart from the above argument I believe that there are some other benefits, if railways will develop more. One of the other benefits is financially, in one train many people can travel at same time while in road transports only few people can travel at a time, so fare of the railways will be more cheaper than road transport. On the other hand, road transport sometimes provides more suitability for the people. For instance, wherever people want can stop the vehicles and complete their task as needed. For a short distance sometimes people can save their time because train time is fixed, please can not start their journey whenever they want. In conclusion, railways is the good option for public transport, which will save the environment and people money while road transport also befitting people in some cases like short distance learning.
Better and environment friendly
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Many
types of
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are available around us. Out of all these
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is the better option for the
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. I
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to a high extent for more development of the railways.

There are
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benefits when
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railways
will develop more.
Firstly
, traffic on the
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road
will decrease
dramatically
. After the development of the facility in
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railways
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people
will
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more with
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which will result in a reduction of traffic
as well
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save
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of
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, moving by
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is one of the safest ways of
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transport
. As per trend accidents on
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roads
are more than
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,
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people
's death rates are
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less when they are traveling with
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as compared to
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modes of
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transport
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Finally
,
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road
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transport
is generating more pollution than
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railways
, when
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people
will
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rail
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transport
more
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Apart from the above argument I believe that there are
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benefits, if
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will develop more. One of the
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benefits is
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, in one
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train
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at same
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On the
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hand,
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the vehicles and complete their task as needed. For a short distance
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their journey whenever they want.

In conclusion
,
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option for public
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, which will save the environment and
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people
money while
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befitting
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cases like short distance learning.
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IELTS essay overnment should spend money on railways rather than roads.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
295 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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