Search
Tools
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

Our current lifestyle has a negative impact on our future generation Do you agree or disagree

Our current lifestyle has a negative impact on our future generation oR1Mw

I believe that our way of dealing with the current situation will have negative consequences on our future generation. Their lives would be more difficult and different from ours, and they might face darker effects because of the reasons that I will present in subsequent essays. First of all, we are experiencing extreme deforestation without restoring it. It leads to cutting down of excessive numbers of trees and converting the forest area into human habitats and major cities. As a result, our future generations will not able to be close to nature nor will they be able to breathe fresh air. Also, rapid industrialization takes a major role in exploiting and polluting our environment. As a result, in the future, our children are vulnerable to respiratory disease. To illustrate, in my hometown, comparing to the past, there were fewer children with respiratory illness but nowadays, most of the children are suffering from harmful ailments. New York Times has reported that there is a 30% increase in children with the disease and it is more likely to increase in the future. Thus, my example shows how our current situation is effecting our future generation. As a result of increasing population and urbanization, there is a decrease in playgrounds so, children tend to stay home and get attached to technology such as video games, mobile phones, and televisions. Consequently, it has negative impacts on their eyes and mental growth. For example, during my childhood days, my friends and I used to go camping and enjoy nature but now the story is completely different as they do not have access to the natural environment. Besides this, we are witnessing bad food habits such as frozen vegetables and processed foods also growing fast-food fondness among children leading to unhealthy food habits, obesity, and other health ailments. Had there been strict laws for urbanization and deforestation, we could have decreased the negative effects In summation, because of our current lifestyles like deforestation and urbanization, we are putting the lives of next-generation in peril.

I believe that our way of dealing with the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
 situation will have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
 consequences on our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprospectiveeventualsubsequentplannedimminentforthcoming
future
 generation. Their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
 would be more difficult and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 from ours, and they might face darker effects This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of the reasons that I will present in subsequent essays.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, we are experiencing extreme deforestation without restoring it. It leads to cutting down of excessive numbers of trees and converting the forest area into human habitats and major cities. As a result
, our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprospectiveeventualsubsequentplannedimminentforthcoming
future
 generations will not able to be close to nature nor will they be able to breathe fresh air. Also
, rapid industrialization takes a major role in exploiting and polluting our environment. As a result
, in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprospectiveeventualsubsequentplannedimminentforthcoming
future
, our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
children
 are vulnerable to respiratory disease. To illustrate, in my hometown, comparing to the past, there were fewer You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
children
 with respiratory illness This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 nowadays, most of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
children
 are suffering from harmful ailments. New York Times has reported that there is a 30% increase in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
children
 with the disease and it is more likely to increase in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprospectiveeventualsubsequentplannedimminentforthcoming
future
. Thus
, my example This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
shows
 how our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
 situation is effecting our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprospectiveeventualsubsequentplannedimminentforthcoming
future
 generation.

As a result
 of increasing population and urbanization, there is a decrease in playgrounds This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
children
 tend to stay home and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 attached to technology such as video games, mobile phones, and televisions. Consequently
, it has This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
 impacts on their eyes and mental growth. For example
, during my childhood days, my friends and I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to go camping and enjoy nature This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 the story is completely This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 as they do not have access to the natural environment. Besides
 this, we are witnessing This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 food habits such as frozen vegetables and processed foods also
 growing This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:quickrapidswiftprompt
fast
-food fondness among You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
children
 leading to unhealthy food habits, obesity, and other health ailments. Had there been strict laws for urbanization and deforestation, we could have decreased the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragrapheffects.effects!effects?effects:effects,effects;
effects


In summation, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
 lifestyles like deforestation and urbanization, we are putting the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
 of next
-generation in peril. 