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Nuclear energy is a better choice for meeting increasing demand, agree or disagree?

In this contemporary era, people make a massive use of energy for different purposes. It is believe that nuclear energy is better than alternative sources to meet increasing energy demands. I agree with this statement and will discuss the merits of nuclear energy. Embarking on primary reason regarding benefits of nuclear energy to fulfil demands is that it is less expensive. This is to say, other sources of energy such as wind and hydro needs lot of money as compared to nuclear energy to set up power plants. They needs huge number of material which lead to more expenses. Secondly, wind and solar power plants are too big. Tgeref
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people
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make
a massive
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use
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energy
for
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different
purposes. It is
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believe
that nuclear
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energy
is better than alternative sources to
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meet
increasing
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energy
demands. I
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agree
with this statement and will discuss the merits of nuclear
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energy
. Embarking on primary reason regarding benefits of nuclear
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energy
to fulfil demands is that it is less expensive. This is to say, other sources of
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energy
such as wind and hydro
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needs
lot of money as compared to nuclear
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energy
to set up power plants. They
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needs
huge number of material which lead to more expenses.
Secondly
, wind and solar power plants are too
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big
.
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Tgeref

IELTS essay Nuclear energy is a better choice for meeting increasing demand, agree or disagree?

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  American English
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108 words
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