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In the past, people lived their lives in the place where they were born

In the past, people lived their lives in the place where they were born Y53Q
Advancement of technology has fueled the developement of transportation in last 50 years. World is interconnected with roboust transport system than ever before and made travelling very convenient and affordable. In my view, it has a postive effect to the development of an induvidual as well as the nation. A century before, travelling to another country is not easy, in late 1980's it was a dream for many and in 2000 it's termed as luxory. But now the world is connected with very well established air buses, large sea routes and longer roads, most importantly its economical. This is one of the major contributor to a country tourisim and its related income. Particularly in south east asia, many under developed countries local economy hugely depends on the tourisim. People travel to another country for business and personal reasons. On one hand, business people can travel to any part of the world in meeting thier clients, strike the business deal and accelerate the company productivity. On the other hand, it really helps the induvidual in travelling to their home country more frequently. To conclude, travel is no longer a dream, almost everyone in the world can afford to travel with the developement of transport system and its very sophosticated than before. It directly or indirectly supports many country income and has set a psotive impact.
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developement
of transportation in last 50 years.
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is interconnected
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transport system than ever
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before
and made travelling
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convenient and affordable. In my view, it has a
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effect to the development of an
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as well
as the nation.

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, travelling to another
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country
is not easy, in late
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luxory
.
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now
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world
is connected
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very
well established air buses, large sea routes and longer roads, most
importantly
its economical. This is one of the major contributor to a
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country
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tourisim
and its related income.
Particularly
in
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south east
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asia
,
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under developed
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countries
local economy
hugely
depends on the
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tourisim
.

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People
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travel
to another
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country
for business and personal reasons. On one hand, business
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people
can
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travel
to any part of the
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world
in meeting
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thier
clients, strike the business deal and accelerate the
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company
productivity.
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helps
the
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induvidual
in travelling to their home
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country
more
frequently
.

To conclude
,
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travel
is no longer a dream, almost everyone in the
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world
can afford to
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travel
with the
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developement
of transport system and its
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very
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sophosticated
than
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before
. It
directly
or
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supports
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many
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income and has set a
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psotive
impact.
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IELTS essay In the past, people lived their lives in the place where they were born

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
224 words
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