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Nowadays people buy a lot of things, even if they don't really need them. why do you think people buy unwanted things? Is it a positive or negative trend for the individual and the society ?

Shopping became one of the most enjoyable habit of the peoples. Many people buy things which they really want, to fulfil the need of life on the other hand they also buy things which are useless for them and this behaviour is becoming a trend now. This will discuss the pros and cons of this behaviour. Digital Market impacted the behaviour of consumer, the things are advertised in such a manner that people will buy it and sometime when they brought it they will come to know that these item are useless for them and they even cannot utilize them at end they will through it in the garbage which actually had a very bad impact on the environment and society. One thought is that they are not only burning their money as well as impacting the society buy increasing garbage which is not properly recycled by the government authorities and create pollutions in the environment as the recent research shown that plastic item waste is increase by 10% in past 5 years. Second when they buy useless things as shown in advertisement which are promoted by their ideal they feel up in society they have the item which in which their ideal came. For example: - if an actor is advertising a car gadget and a person buying it so that he can display it with his colleagues for influencing purpose that he had a car gadget which is advertise by the famous actor. That way he can get personal satisfaction that he had something which is unique. In my view, buy unnecessary things had a bad impact on the society and individual as well, because they increase waste in society and spending money for no outcome. On the other hand if something give an individual a personal satisfaction so that he feel relax than that way I think it is good to have.
Shopping became one of the most enjoyable habit of the peoples.
Many
people
buy
things which they
really
want, to fulfil the need of life
on the other hand
they
also
buy
things which are useless for them and this
behaviour
is becoming a trend
now
. This will discuss the pros and cons of this
behaviour
.

Digital Market impacted the
behaviour
of consumer, the things
are advertised
in such a manner that
people
will
buy
it and sometime when they brought it they will
come
to know that these item are useless for
them and
they even cannot utilize them at
end
they will through it in the garbage which actually had a
very
bad
impact on the environment and
society
. One
thought
is that they are not
only
burning their money
as well
as impacting the
society
buy
increasing garbage which is not
properly
recycled by the
government
authorities and create pollutions in the environment as the recent research shown that plastic item waste is increase by 10% in past 5 years.

Second when they
buy
useless things as shown in advertisement which
are promoted
by their ideal they feel up in
society
they have the item which in which their ideal came.
For example
:
-
if an actor is advertising a car gadget and a person buying it
so
that he can display it with his colleagues for influencing purpose that he had a car gadget which is
advertise
by the
famous
actor. That way he can
get
personal satisfaction that he had something which is unique.

In my view,
buy
unnecessary things had a
bad
impact on the
society
and individual
as well
,
because
they increase waste in
society
and spending money for no outcome.
On the other hand
if something give an individual a personal satisfaction
so
that he feel relax than that way I
think
it is
good
to have.
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IELTS essay Nowadays people buy a lot of things, even if they don't really need them. why do you think people buy unwanted things? Is it a positive or negative trend for the individual and the society?

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