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Nowadays most green energy is becoming evermore prevalent in both developed and developing countries. Some argue they greatly reduce costs and are better for the environment, others believe they are a serious threat to energy security. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays most green energy is becoming evermore prevalent in both developed and developing countries. Some argue they greatly reduce costs and are better for the environment, others believe they are a serious threat to energy security. 1YXy
With the increase in industrialisation and the power demand, green energy is considered as the future. Both developed and developing nations have relied on this source of energy because of its low usage costs and least impact on the environment. However, many people around the world argue that this green energy can be not reliable. This essay will highlight both views and conclude how I feel green energy is a great boon for the world. Green Energy is a relatively new technology and not many around the globe are aware of its benefits and properties. Due to this lack of awareness, many people cannot adjust to the new technology and would still prefer old methods of energy consumption as those are reliable and convenient to use. For instance, in the case of solar energy consumption in the house, many people still fear that the technology is not fully developed, and they might have to face a huge power shortage in case of a change in weather. Further, the regulations required to control the energy sector are more focused on the non-renewables and the renewable market is highly unregulated throughout the world. This has caused damage to the end consumers as they have to face uneven pricing and inferior quality of services by service providers. However, the benefits which the environment can benefit from this advancement in technology cannot be neglected. Green energy is considered to be the cleanest form of energy and causes the least damage to the environment as compared to other forms such use of non-renewable sources such as petrol and diesel. Society needs to migrate to this form of energy if we intend to preserve the non-renewable resources for our future generation. Moreover, the setup cost which is usually on the higher side as compared to the other forms of energy can be easily covered over the period by savings in per-unit cost of energy consumed. In conclusion, I believe although green technology is new for the world to accept and migrate, a proper awareness about its properties and benefits might increase the usage in the future.
With the increase in
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industrialisation
and the power demand,
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green
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energy
is considered
as the future. Both developed and developing nations have relied on this source of
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energy
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because
of its low usage costs and least impact on the environment.
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,
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many
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people
around the world argue that this
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energy
can be not reliable. This essay will highlight both views and conclude how I feel
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green
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energy
is a great boon for the world.

Green
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Energy
is a
relatively
new
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technology
and not
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many
around the globe are aware of its
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benefits
and properties. Due to this lack of awareness,
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many
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people
cannot adjust to the new
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technology
and would
still
prefer
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old
methods of
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energy
consumption as those are reliable and convenient to
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use
.
For instance
, in the case of solar
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energy
consumption in the
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house
,
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many
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people
still
fear that the
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technology
is not
fully
developed, and they might
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have to
face a huge power shortage in case of a
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change
in weather.
Further
, the regulations required to control the
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energy
sector are more focused on the non-renewables and the renewable market is
highly
unregulated throughout the world. This has caused damage to the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
consumers as they
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have to
face uneven pricing and inferior quality of services by service providers.

However
, the
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benefits
which the environment can
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benefit
from this advancement in
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technology
cannot
be neglected
.
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Green
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energy
is considered
to be the cleanest
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form
of
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energy
and causes the least damage to the environment as compared to other
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forms
such
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use
of non-renewable sources such as petrol and diesel. Society needs to migrate to this
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form
of
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energy
if we intend to preserve the non-renewable resources for our future generation.
Moreover
, the setup cost which is
usually
on the higher side as compared to the other
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forms
of
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energy
can be
easily
covered over the period by savings in per-unit cost of
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energy
consumed.

In conclusion
, I believe although
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green
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technology
is new for the world to accept and migrate, a proper awareness about its properties and
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benefits
might increase the usage in the future.
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IELTS essay Nowadays most green energy is becoming evermore prevalent in both developed and developing countries. Some argue they greatly reduce costs and are better for the environment, others believe they are a serious threat to energy security.

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