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Nowadays more and more researches are being carried out and sponsored by private organisations. Do advantages outweigh the disadvantages in such cases?

Nowadays more and more researches are being carried out and sponsored by private organisations. Do advantages outweigh the disadvantages in such cases? E3dRq
Invention and research are always mutually inclusive to each other. There is a widespread suspicion when research works are owned by private enterprises. Because, we have been acclimated to the notion that the research programs should always be government owned. This essay will cover the salient points of private owned research programs. To begin with, there are multiple bottlenecks when trying to commence a government owned or government sponsored research program. Furthermore, it may require to get multiple approvals from various departments in order to get the right funding as well as the required infrastructure needs. This acts as a red tape in impeding the interest of the people who have invested so much of their efforts to realise their dreams. On the contrary, there would be no interferences if the research work is governed by private organisations. Owing to this reason, the outcome of the research will soon yield the success. The other major advantage of private owned innovation is that, there will be no role for the media to have a constant touch about the various stages of the research. Thereby, the research work will be tightly held as secret and no technological theft can happen. For example, space exploration is a daunting task and it even requires a huge amount of money to be invested. Because of this reason, many countries are unwilling to shed their financial reserves to explore the outer space. However, the private organisation SpaceX has started launching satellites and rovers from its own Launchpad. This practice has opened a vision of promoting private enterprises in the research oriented work. In conclusion, as far as my views are concerned, research owned by private bodies is a beneficial phenomenon for which there are a number of significant advantages. Therefore, the governments should begin to liberalise and incentivize the private organisations who are involved with such practices, as they are better equipped to outweigh the time consuming government funded research. If that happens, there will be a promising future.
Invention and
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research
are always
mutually
inclusive to each other. There is a widespread suspicion when
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research
works are
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owned
by
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private
enterprises.
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Because
, we have
been acclimated
to the notion that the
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research
programs should always be
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government
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owned
. This essay will cover the salient points of
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private
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owned
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research
programs.

To
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begin
with, there are multiple bottlenecks when trying to commence a
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government
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owned
or
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government
sponsored
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research
program.
Furthermore
, it may require to
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get
multiple approvals from various departments in order to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
the right funding
as well
as the required infrastructure needs. This acts as a red tape in impeding the interest of the
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people
who have invested
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so
much of their efforts to
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realise
their dreams.
On the contrary
, there would be no interferences if the
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research
work
is governed
by
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private
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organisations
. Owing to this reason, the outcome of the
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research
will
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soon
yield the success.

The other major advantage of
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private
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owned
innovation is that, there will be no role for the media to have a constant touch about the various stages of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
research
. Thereby, the
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research
work will be
tightly
held as secret and no technological theft can happen.
For example
, space exploration is a daunting task and it even requires a huge amount of money to
be invested
.
Because of this
reason,
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many
countries are unwilling to shed their financial reserves to explore the outer space.
However
, the
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private
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organisation
SpaceX has
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
launching satellites and rovers from its
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own
Launchpad. This practice has opened a vision of promoting
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private
enterprises in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
research
oriented work.

In conclusion
, as far as my views
are concerned
,
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research
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owned
by
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private
bodies is a beneficial phenomenon for which there are a number of significant advantages.
Therefore
, the
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governments
should
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begin
to
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liberalise
and incentivize the
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private
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organisations
who
are involved
with such practices, as they are better equipped to outweigh the
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time consuming
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government
funded
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research
. If that happens, there will be a promising future.
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IELTS essay Nowadays more and more researches are being carried out and sponsored by private organisations. Do advantages outweigh the disadvantages in such cases?

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