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Nowadays, crime is becoming an increasingly popular genre amongst readers and television viewers.

Nowadays, crime is becoming an increasingly popular genre amongst readers and television viewers. This essay discusses some of the possible reasons for the surge in popularity and explains why I am not really a big fan of it. There are two main reasons why this genre is becoming so popular. The main one is that society seems to have an increasing fascination with solving criminal mysteries. More specifically, people like to put themselves in the shoes of the detective and try to solve crimes. Another reason is that new types of crimes have been emerging, which are fascinating to audiences. For instance, a lot of books and shows are about cybercrime, and people seem to love this new topic. Personally, I’m not a big fan of this type of story. On the whole, I’m more into non-fiction. I especially like finding out about scientific discoveries and the emergence of new technologies. For instance, I really like watching the Discovery channel on television. When I do read or watch fiction, I prefer something where the outcome is not so clearly known in advance. For example, I really like Black Mirror on TV because there are always unexpected twists and turns in the plot to keep the audience on the edge of their seat. In conclusion, people are increasingly fascinated with stories about crime because of the joy of solving crimes and the influence that technology is having on the genre. However, I’m not so keen on it because I prefer non-fiction; and, when it does come to fiction, less predictable plots.
Nowadays,
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is becoming an
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some
of the possible reasons for the surge in popularity and
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explains
why I am not
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big
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There are two main reasons why this genre is becoming
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so
popular. The main one is that society seems to have an increasing fascination with solving criminal mysteries. More
specifically
,
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people
like to put themselves in the shoes of the detective and try to solve
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crimes
. Another reason is that new types of
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crimes
have been emerging, which are fascinating to audiences.
For instance
,
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a lot of
books and
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shows
are about cybercrime, and
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people
seem to
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love
this new topic.

Personally
, I’m not a
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big
fan of this type of story.
On the whole
, I’m more into non-fiction. I
especially
like finding out about scientific discoveries and the emergence of new technologies.
For instance
, I
really
like watching the Discovery channel on television. When I do read or
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watch
fiction, I prefer something where the outcome is not
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so
clearly
known in advance.
For example
, I
really
like Black Mirror on TV
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because
there are always unexpected twists and turns in the plot to
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keep
the audience on the edge of their seat.

In conclusion
,
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people
are
increasingly
fascinated with stories about
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crime
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because
of the joy of solving
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crimes
and the influence that technology is having on the genre.
However
, I’m not
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so
keen on it
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because
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come
to fiction, less predictable plots.
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IELTS essay Nowadays, crime is becoming an increasingly popular genre amongst readers and television viewers.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
260 words
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