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Nowadays anyone can post news on the internet. As a result, we cannot trust the information we read there. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays anyone can post news on the internet. As a result, we cannot trust the information we read there. E3dbB
These days, any kind of people can share the news on the social media. Because of that, we cannot completely trust the news shared on the network. First of all, I do not completely agree that every posted news is fake. As internet utility increases, we are able to know each and every situation which occurs in the small villages even in other continents as well. For instance, recently we took prior precaution as lock down regarding the pandemic outbreak by watching the news from other countries. So, in my opinion there will be some true information that people will know by watching the news. On the other hand, I do agree that false information will flew in the air by adding some extra pepper to that news. Usually some people, post some cooked up narrations or cock and bull stories to grab the reader's attention. For example, few marketing agencies share the news on the media for promotiong their products or to increase their profits. So, generally it depends on the individual perspective to trust the information to what extent. To summarize, news will be helpful until and unless we evaluate, how much information can be trusted.
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can share the
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on the social media.
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of that, we cannot completely trust the
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shared on the network.

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, I do not completely
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that every posted
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is fake. As internet utility increases, we are able to know each and every situation which occurs in the
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small
villages even in other continents
as well
.
For instance
, recently we took prior precaution as lock down regarding the pandemic outbreak by watching the
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news
from other countries.
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So
, in my opinion there will be
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some
true
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information
that
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people
will know by watching the news.

On the other hand
, I do
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that false
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will
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flew
in the air by adding
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some
extra pepper to that
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news
.
Usually
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some
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people
, post
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some
cooked up narrations or
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cock and bull
stories to grab the reader's attention.
For example
, few marketing agencies share the
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news
on the media for
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promotiong
their products or to increase their profits.
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So
,
generally
it depends on the individual perspective to trust the
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information
to what extent.

To summarize
,
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news
will be helpful until and unless we evaluate, how much
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
can
be trusted
.
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IELTS essay Nowadays anyone can post news on the internet. As a result, we cannot trust the information we read there.

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4 paragraphs
198 words
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