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Now a days the employees are changing their employment like jobs or work placement . they using various options. What are some causes. Give some suggestions

It is hard to deny that, the world is changing at a swift speed. The norms have drastically changed in very field along with corporate world. In past employment options were still and people have done a single job throughout their life. However, the standard has completely changed. Reasons for such phenomenon and possible solution, which one can adapt, are explained in the ensuing paragraph. To begin with, due to inflation and over growing competition market is unstable for companies. Therefore, tobe financially stable, such companies give lay offs to personal in unfavourable circumstances. In addition, the working culture is also constantly changing. Due to state-of-the art-technology, companies incorporate new methods and working style to keep an upper hand in the market. In turn, some employees find it difficult to adjust. There are some precautionary measures, which employees can take to be ready for any situation. Firstly, all the apprentices should be gloomy. This is because in situation like layoff or learning a new technology, workers, can keep themselves ready. By being distrustful one less susceptible to mental stress and can apply for a new job without any delay. Secondly, one must have adaptive nature. This is due to the fact that today, companies constantly induce their personnel to learn new procedures and method to make operation smooth and flawless. This nature will also help in adjusting to a new job. To conclude, I pen down by retreating that the employees have to keep themselves ready for any corporate situation. Competitive world and avail of state of the art technology has utterly changed the employment options. However, gloomy nature and adaptive nature are elixirs for workers. Votes Cancel rating Give it 1/10 Give it 2/10 Give it 3/10 Give it 4/10 Give it 5/10 Give it 6/10 Give it 7/10 Give it 8/10 Give it 9/10 Give it 10/10 Average: 8. 9 (2 votes)
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drastically
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changed
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field along with corporate world. In past employment options were
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people
have done a single job throughout their life.
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changed
. Reasons for such phenomenon and possible solution, which one can adapt, are
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begin
with, due to inflation and over growing competition market is unstable for
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companies
.
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,
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financially
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companies
give
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lay offs
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unfavourable
circumstances.
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constantly
changing. Due to state-of-the art-technology,
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companies
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new
methods and working style to
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an upper hand in the market. In turn,
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employees find it difficult to adjust.

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precautionary measures, which employees can take to be ready for any situation.
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, all the apprentices should be gloomy. This is
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because
in situation like layoff or learning a
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new
technology, workers, can
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keep
themselves ready. By being distrustful one less susceptible to mental
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and can apply for a
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new
job without any delay.
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have adaptive
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.
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,
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induce their personnel to learn
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procedures and method to
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operation smooth and flawless. This
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nature
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new
job.

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, I pen down by retreating that the employees
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themselves ready for any corporate situation. Competitive world and avail of
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technology has
utterly
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changed
the employment options.
However
, gloomy
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nature
and adaptive
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are elixirs for workers.

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IELTS essay Now a days the employees are changing their employment like jobs or work placement. they using various options. What are some causes. Give some suggestions

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