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Now a days people should stop eating meat for their healthy diet, what extent do you agree or disagree ?

In contemporary time following healthy diet is mandatory in order to live healthy and prosperous life. However, I strongly disagree with the statement stating meat should be eliminated from the diet in order to follow healthy diet. This essay will provide all the necessary arguments supporting my view To begin with, there are many athletes out there having meat as mandatoryconsumable in their diet to uplift their athletic performance. Furthermore, it is advisable for many patients to eat healthy meat in order to fulfill their lacking nutritional need. For instance, eating beef can help with iron deficiency anemia. Additionally, if humans will stop eating meat it will interrupt natural food chain system. For example, if people will stop eating goat meat the number of goats will increase and will need more resources as food causing scarcity for other species and will lead to imbalance food chain However, eating too much meat can be dangerous for an individual as eating beef cooked in an unhealthy manner will result in heart dieses, obesity, unhealthy fat and many more, Further more, consuming more and more meat of certain animal can result in extinction of that specific habitat. In conclusion, I would say eating beef has own merits and de merits associated with it. But, if an individual consume it in certain limitation and in specific way it resolves many health issue. As advantages here totally outweigh disadvantages I am completely disagree with the belief that meat should be cut down from diet for healthy life.
In contemporary time following
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healthy
diet is mandatory in order to
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live
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healthy
and prosperous life.
However
, I
strongly
disagree with the statement stating
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meat
should
be eliminated
from the diet in order to follow
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healthy
diet. This essay will provide all the necessary arguments supporting my view To
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begin
with, there are
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many
athletes out there having
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meat
as
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mandatoryconsumable
in their diet to uplift their athletic performance.
Furthermore
, it is advisable for
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many
patients to eat
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healthy
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meat
in order to fulfill their lacking nutritional need.
For instance
,
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beef can
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help
with iron deficiency anemia.
Additionally
, if humans will
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stop
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eating
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meat
it will interrupt natural food chain system.
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, if
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people
will
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stop
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eating
goat
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meat
the number of goats will increase and will need more resources as food causing scarcity for other species and will lead to imbalance food
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chain


However
,
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eating
too much
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can be
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dangerous
for an individual as
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eating
beef cooked
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in an unhealthy manner
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dieses
, obesity, unhealthy
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fat
and
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more,
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more, consuming more and more
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meat
of certain animal can result in extinction of that specific habitat.

In conclusion
, I would say
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eating
beef has
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merits and
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de
merits associated with it.
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But
, if an individual consume it in certain limitation and in specific way it resolves
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many health
issue. As advantages here
totally
outweigh disadvantages I am completely
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disagree
with the belief that
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meat
should be
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cut
down from diet for
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healthy
life.
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IELTS essay Now a days people should stop eating meat for their healthy diet, what extent

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252 words
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