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News plays an important part of most people's lives. Why is news so important to people ? Why is so much news dedicated to bad news? Should the news focus on good news instead?

News plays an important part of most people's lives. Why is news so important to people? Why is so much news dedicated to bad news? Should the news focus on good news instead? m16bn
There are number of things which influence the life of a person and news is one of them. As news increases the awareness of the world it is crucial for a smooth function of a person's life. Most of the headlines are focus on bad news because it brings popularity rather than good, but there should be a balance between good and bad when publishing, broadcasting or telecasting news. News always addresses the natural curiosity of a human being. People like to have to be updated because it is in their biology. The life was depended on awareness of the environment from the beginning of human revolution. The one who had most updated knowledge on the environment was the one who survived long without hesitation. This is examplifies by the fact that the humans dominate the world because their ability to receive, process and act upon on their environment rather than other animals on the planet of earth. Also it is applicable to the todays context because the one who has most updated knowledge on their sorrounding is better lived. Bad news often has wings than good ones. This is the reason why bad news catches big audience. Therfore media houses are rely on bad news instead of good stories which bring them more popularity. But there should be equal space and time for balanced rrepresentation of news, because news can shape people's lives and improve the perspectives towards life. When hearing someone who receives help in need makes people to help each other and increases the knowledge on the danger in the society by having a news regarding a murder. In conclusion, news is one of the most influencing facts in human lives. The better function of a person's life is depended on the news he receives and balance between good and bad news will create a better world for everyone.
There are number of things which influence the
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life
of a person and
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news
is one of them. As
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news
increases the awareness of the world it is crucial for a smooth function of a person's
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life
. Most of the headlines are focus on
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bad
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news
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because
it brings popularity
rather
than
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good
,
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but
there should be a balance between
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good
and
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bad
when publishing, broadcasting or telecasting news.

News always addresses the natural curiosity of a
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human
being.
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People
like to
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have to
be updated
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because
it is in their biology. The
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life
was depended
on awareness of the environment from the beginning of
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human
revolution. The one
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who
had most updated knowledge on the environment was the one
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who
survived long without hesitation. This is
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examplifies
by the fact that the
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humans
dominate the world
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because
their ability to receive, process and act upon on their environment
rather
than other animals on the planet of earth.
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it is applicable to the
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context
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the one
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has most updated knowledge on their
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sorrounding
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.

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often
has wings than
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good
ones. This is the reason why
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bad
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catches
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audience.
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media
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are
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on
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bad
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instead
of
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good
stories which bring them more popularity.
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there should be equal space and time for balanced
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rrepresentation
of
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,
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can shape
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people
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lives
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improve
the perspectives towards
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life
. When hearing someone
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receives
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help
in need
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makes
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to
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help
each other and increases the knowledge on the
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danger
in the society by having a
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regarding a murder.

In conclusion
,
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is one of the most influencing facts in
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human
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lives
. The better function of a person's
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life
is depended
on the
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news
he receives and balance between
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good
and
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bad
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news
will create a better world for everyone.
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IELTS essay News plays an important part of most people's lives. Why is news so important to people? Why is so much news dedicated to bad news? Should the news focus on good news instead?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
312 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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