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natural plaeces such as lakes , s are dirty day by day , what are the reasons and soltions

natural plaeces such as lakes, s are dirty day by day, what are the reasons and soltions 6nQx
There is no doubt that secnic attrations arr getting filthier day-by-day, it can be observed that natural places such as lakes, mountains are being lossing their pristine beauty. This essay will discuss reasons behind this problem and sugggst some solutions. First and foremost reason is that many people have little awareness regarding rubbish which can inflicit incalculable damage to environment, they opine that their ane plastic bottle or wrapper does not inflict to environment because they do not know such type of rubbish is non-biodegradable which will stay for good. Secondly, keeping these place clean it rests on the government as it is their responsibility ans trashcans are not placed on public places so that, heaps of rubbish increased at tourist attraction places. Moreover, although government legislate laws but it does not implement with stringency, it is observed that some authorities themselves lax in imposing heafty amount of tax from those who flout the rules. There are some steps should be taken both by government and individuals. fristly, people should be conscientised regardind their callous attitude towards the environment and government must educate the people that their apathetic attitude towards environment inflcits an irrevocable harm to environment becqause this indifferent attitude towards environment may kill the toriorsm for good. Furthermore, stringent laws must be enacted by authorities and no ane go scot free who flout the rules as well as placing trashcans at public places is a primary duty of the government. To encapsulate, taking consideration the aforementioned information it is abundantly clear that there are multifarious reasons behind this problem but can be curbed by adopting concrete steps.
There is no doubt that
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secnic
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attrations
arr getting filthier day-by-day, it can
be observed
that natural
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places
such as lakes, mountains are being
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lossing
their pristine beauty. This essay will discuss reasons behind this problem and
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sugggst
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some
solutions.

First
and foremost reason is that
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many
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people
have
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little
awareness regarding rubbish which can
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inflicit
incalculable damage to
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environment
, they opine that their
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ane
plastic bottle or wrapper does not inflict to
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environment
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because
they do not know such type of rubbish is non-biodegradable which will stay for
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good
.
Secondly
, keeping these
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place
clean it rests on the
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government
as it is their responsibility ans trashcans are not placed on public
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places
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so
that, heaps of rubbish increased at tourist attraction
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places
.
Moreover
, although
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government
legislate laws
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but
it does not implement with stringency, it
is observed
that
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some
authorities themselves lax in imposing
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heafty
amount of tax from those who flout the
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rules
.

There are
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some
steps should
be taken
both by
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government
and individuals.
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fristly
,
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people
should be
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conscientised
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regardind
their callous attitude towards the
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environment
and
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government
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must
educate the
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people
that their apathetic attitude towards
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environment
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inflcits
an irrevocable harm to
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environment
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becqause
this indifferent attitude towards
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environment
may kill the
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toriorsm
for
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good
.
Furthermore
, stringent laws
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must
be enacted
by authorities and no
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ane go
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scot free
who flout the
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rules
as well
as placing trashcans at public
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places
is a primary duty of the
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government
.

To encapsulate, taking consideration the aforementioned information it is
abundantly
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clear
that there are multifarious reasons behind this problem
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but
can
be curbed
by adopting concrete steps.
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IELTS essay natural plaeces such as lakes, s are dirty day by day, what are the reasons and soltions

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  American English
4 paragraphs
269 words
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