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Many people chose to work or travel for a year before college to what extent do you agree or disagree

Many people chose to work or travel for a year before college g5bgA

As the education system is now more hectic and stressful and expensive therefore, many youths chose to do work to meet their college expensive or go for some outing for chilling before college start. For me, I do agree with this and, I do recommend people to take a break of the year after the schooling and chill out for a bit to doing something if they are interested in working can do a job. College is the next step of your life and it is the moment in your life when you decide what you want to be in your future and for that youngster do take a break of a year in that some pupil chose for working so that they can meet their academic need and some people go for travelling with their family or by themselves so that they can refresh themselves before the university started. For example: when I was about to enter college I took a one year drop because at that time I was so confused I didn't know what should I have chosen because all my future depended on that, at last, last I came to this conclusion that will take a break for some time and I drop my one year and went for a trip in the north part of India. As per me, I do agree people do consider taking a year drop after their school. And in that year they can do whatever they want either they can work or can go for outing with family or friends or alone. And make up their mind what they want to chose next as entering the academy is life-changing for them because whatever they will do their future will depend on depend on that. Overall in short summary taking a year gap between the school and college is a great idea as entering the university is going to change everything and fir this mentally prepared is good

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many
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meet
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some
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 college This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
. For me, I do This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
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people
 to take a break of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 after the schooling and chill out for a bit to doing something if they are interested
 in working can do a job.

College is the next
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year
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some
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so
 that they can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 their academic need and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 go for travelling with their family or by themselves This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that they can refresh themselves This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 the university This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
. For example
: when I was about to enter college I took a one You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 drop This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 at that time I was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
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because
 all my future depended on that, at last, last I came to this conclusion that will take a break for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 time and I drop my one You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 and went for The usual preposition for "a trip" with a named destination is "to". Did you mean "a trip to"?a trip to
a trip in
 the north part of India.

As per me, I do This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 do consider taking a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 drop after their school. And in that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 they can do whatever they want either they can work or can go for outing with family or friends or alone. And This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 up their mind what they want Did you mean "to choose"?to choose
to chose
next
 as entering the academy is life-changing for them This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 whatever they will do their future will This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only "depend on".depend on
depend on depend on
 that.

Overall
 in short summary taking a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 gap between the school and college is a great This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
 as entering the university is going to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 everything and fir this mentally prepared is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good