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Many old buildings protected by law are part of nation's history. Some people think they should be knocked down and replaced by new one. How important is it to maintain old buildings? Should history stand in the way of progress ?

Many old buildings protected by law are part of nation's history. Some people think they should be knocked down and replaced by new one. How important is it to maintain old buildings? Should history stand in the way of progress? V9p3
Many nations are inherited by their ancestors' time's development. the old buildings were made by an ancestor should be protected by implying a law for preventing it. A section of society exemplified that an old structure should not be repaired instead new one should be made. However, It is very important to prevent your history from knocking down an old building. This essay shall give some point which describes it would not be hindered in the progress of any nation. to commence with, history plays a pivotal role in developing any nation or continents. first and foremost, undeniably, citizens of a particular nation learn from history as it requires a great amount of treasure to build it. if talk about an earlier time, people used to do myriad prowess on stone by craving their living habits. secondly, these old buildings provide money to a government for a nation's growth as a worldly population come to see a variety of culture and their legacy. it also contributes a job for locals. for instance, they earn money by selling a product that is made traditionally and many foreign-based hotels get a chance to flourish. on the side of development, history has never stymied the development of a nation. chiefly, it is ubiquitous that maintenance of these buildings require a lot of money because the materials were used in old structure scarce and valuable. although it requires a budget from the government, eventually it boosts the economy and many foreign countries should invest in a country that makes them economically sustainable. additionally, the history of a nation provides a base and world remember a nation in terms of major historical events. To recapitulate, the government must have to enforce a low in favour of saving the old building and maintain it as an effective step towards history never alleviate the progress of a nation.
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buildings
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by an ancestor should
be protected
by implying a law for preventing it. A section of society exemplified that an
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old
structure should not
be repaired
instead
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be made
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to
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prevent
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history
from knocking down an
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old
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building
. This essay shall give
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some
point which
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describes
it would not
be hindered
in the progress of any nation.

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commence with,
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history
plays a pivotal role in developing any
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nation
or continents.
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first
and foremost,
undeniably
, citizens of a particular
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nation
learn from
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history
as it requires a great amount of treasure to build it. if talk about an earlier time,
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people
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used
to do myriad prowess on stone by craving their living habits.
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secondly
, these
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buildings
provide money to a
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government
for a nation's growth as a worldly population
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to
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see
a variety of culture and their legacy.
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also
contributes a job for locals.
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instance, they earn money by selling a product that
is made
traditionally
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foreign-based hotels
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has never stymied the development of a
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.
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, it is ubiquitous that maintenance of these
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require
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a lot of
money
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because
the materials were
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used
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structure scarce and valuable.
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although
it requires a budget from the
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government
,
eventually
it boosts the economy and
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foreign countries should invest in a country that
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makes
them
economically
sustainable.
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additionally
, the
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of a
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provides a base and world remember a
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nation
in terms of major historical
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events
.

To recapitulate, the
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government
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enforce a low in
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favour
of saving the
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old
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building
and maintain it as an effective step towards
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history
never alleviate the progress of a
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nation
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IELTS essay Many old buildings protected by law are part of nation's history. Some people think they should be knocked down and replaced by new one. How important is it to maintain old buildings? Should history stand in the way of progress?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
311 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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