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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems,as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. mmPL
It is clear that living in foreign country has it's own positive and negative effects. Which become reason of major social problems as well as practical problems. I agree with this notion. However, I think anybody coming in another country should respect notional culture. There is no denying that foreign language can become a cause of language barrier, which means that person coming from another country might not be speak the same local language which there habitats always use therefore, they cannot understand each other's. moreover they not communicate with anybody as well as not explor the local culture of country. It may be bad impact on visitors.
It is
clear
that living in foreign
country
has
it's
own
positive
and
negative
effects. Which become reason of major social problems
as well
as practical problems. I
agree
with this notion.
However
, I
think
anybody
coming
in another
country
should respect notional culture. There is no denying that foreign language can become a cause of language barrier, which means that person coming from another
country
might not be
speak
the same local language which there habitats always
use
therefore
, they cannot understand each other's.
moreover
they not communicate with anybody
as well
as not
explor
the local culture of
country
. It may be
bad
impact on visitors.
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IELTS essay Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.

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