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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. with this statement? J8L6
It often said that choosing a foreign country as your life destination where you are forced to speak a new language can lead to major communal and practical issues. Advancing on day to day life in an international country will be definitely challenging for the peoples who are coming from extremely different cultures and traditions but it will not make any practical challenges for their future once they are accustomed with the life standards of the new country. Getting normalised with a new atmosphere which is completely different from their home country culture without having strong fluency on the language will be definitely a night mare for everyone who thinks to elevate their living standards by selecting a foreign country to spend rest of their lifetime. The differences can be spotted on each and every aspects of the life such as life manners, cuisines, professional ethics etc. The work cultures on most of the developed countries that are welcoming immigrants cannot be even compared with that of the various asian developing countries. For getting promoted on higher positions in these situations your incompatibility with the nations culture and traditions and your language proficiency will be weighed with that of the native speaking citizens. To exemplify, Indian immigrants are suffering lot on the Canada on their initial years as the Canadian work ethics mainly focus on the task completion skills not on your working hours. Immigration will not be a reason for other practical problems because it will not make one to forget their mother tongue and traditional culture instead it helps to acquire more knowledge about a different culture. The experiences from a foreign country will only aids to make a better person as from where he gains the informations about the variety of cultures in the world and the need to obey the rules stipulated by the government. Recent studies on Non resident Indians returned from different international nations shows the discipline of the peoples are raised to almost 25% and they are living their life back in india obeying almost all the laws stipulated by the government. In a nutshell, the immigrants on every country with their attachments to the mother tongue and culture will not be able to enjoy all the golden benefits that are enjoyed by the native citizens but it will help them to thrive on their career and personal life in the long run than compared to living compromised on their own country.
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said that choosing a foreign
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as your
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destination where you
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day to day
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life
in an international
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country
will be definitely challenging for the peoples who are coming from
extremely
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different
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cultures
and traditions
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but
it will not
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make
any practical challenges for their future once they are
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accustomed with
the
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standards of the new country.

Getting
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normalised
with a new atmosphere which is completely
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different
from their home
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country
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culture
without having strong fluency on the language will be definitely a
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night mare
for everyone who
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to elevate their living standards by selecting a foreign
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to spend rest of their lifetime. The differences can
be spotted
on each and every
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aspects
of the
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life
such as
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life
manners, cuisines, professional ethics etc. The work
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cultures
on most of the developed
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countries
that are welcoming immigrants cannot be even compared with that of the various
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asian
developing
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countries
. For getting promoted on higher positions in these situations your incompatibility with the nations
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culture
and traditions and your language proficiency will
be weighed
with that of the native speaking citizens. To exemplify, Indian immigrants are suffering lot on the Canada on their initial years as the Canadian work ethics
mainly
focus on the task completion
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skills
not on your working hours.

Immigration will not be a reason for other practical problems
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because
it will not
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make
one to forget their mother tongue and traditional
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culture
instead
it
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helps
to acquire more knowledge about a
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different
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culture
. The experiences from a foreign
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country
will
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only
aids to
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make
a better person as from where he gains the
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informations
about the variety of
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cultures
in the world and the need to obey the
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rules
stipulated by the
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government
. Recent studies on
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Non resident
Indians returned from
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different
international nations
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shows
the discipline of the peoples
are raised
to almost
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25% and
they are living their
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life
back in
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india
obeying almost all the laws stipulated by the
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government
.

In a nutshell, the immigrants on every
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country
with their attachments to the mother tongue and
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culture
will not be able to enjoy all the golden benefits that
are enjoyed
by the native citizens
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but
it will
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help
them to thrive on their career and personal
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life
in the long run than compared to living compromised on their
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own
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country
.
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IELTS essay Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. with this statement?

Essay
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4 paragraphs
409 words
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