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life on mars

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In this set of materials, the reading and lecture both discuss Mars to be next candidate planet to live in. The article strongly postulates that there are certain characteristics features of Mars that has indicated existnace of life could be possible on Mars, and provide three reasons to endorse its idea. However, the professor in the lecture mentions those reason are dubious and called them as an impractical approach, and gainsays each of them. The first and foremost, the writer begins by asserting that signs of liquid water are detected by electromegnetic radiations on the mars, and water in essential for human life. Therefore, life can be started on the mars. On the other hand, the lecturer dismisses this point by indicating that earth is active planet and it's atmosphere is warm that can support the presence of water. First of allthe water presence is not confirmed, Second, even if the water is present, The mars atmosphere is extremely cold that water cannot exist in liquid form because of high pressure. Hence, dismisses the reading claim. Furthermore, the professor posits that it is possible that microbes could survive on the Mars, but human are not microbes. To be more specific, human are weak and their body cannot support the extreme weather conditions of mars. This is due to the reason that mars is a hundred time less dense than earth and there is significant difference of tempertaure at the Mars. Therefore, either humans will burn or freeze on the surface of Mars. These claims clearly refute the writer's implication that life could be possible on mars as mars supports the microbes of the eath. Ultimatelty, the writer wraps up its argument by dclaring that curosity rover has found methane on mars and methane is valuable source to support the life. Not surprisingly, the lecturer takes an issue with that by contending that data collected from Curosity rover is not accurate. Only European research was accurate that indicated very less amount of methane, which could not support life. Furthmore, after that methane presence was not confirmed. Consequently, this reason is not persuasive too
In this set of materials, the reading and lecture both discuss
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Mars
to be
next
candidate planet to
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live
in. The article
strongly
postulates that there are certain characteristics features of
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Mars
that has indicated
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existnace
of
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life
could be possible on
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Mars
, and provide three
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reasons
to endorse its
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idea
.
However
, the professor in the lecture mentions those
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reason
are dubious and called them as an impractical approach, and gainsays each of them.

The
first
and foremost, the writer
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begins
by asserting that signs of liquid
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water
are detected
by
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electromegnetic
radiations on the
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mars
, and
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water
in essential for
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human
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life
.
Therefore
,
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life
can be
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started
on the
The planet and the god are written with uppercase. 'mars' refers to the verb 'mar' meaning to spoil, or the plural of the noun 'mar' meaning blemishes.
mars
.
On the other hand
, the lecturer dismisses this point by indicating that earth is active planet and it's atmosphere is warm that can
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support
the presence of
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water
.
First
of
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allthe
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water
presence is not confirmed, Second, even if the
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water
is present, The
The planet and the god are written with uppercase. 'mars' refers to the verb 'mar' meaning to spoil, or the plural of the noun 'mar' meaning blemishes.
mars
atmosphere is
extremely
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cold
that
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water
cannot exist in liquid form
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because
of high pressure.
Hence
, dismisses the reading claim.

Furthermore
, the professor posits that it is possible that microbes could survive on the
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Mars
,
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but
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human
are not microbes. To be more specific,
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human
are weak and their body cannot
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support
the extreme weather conditions of
The planet and the god are written with uppercase. 'mars' refers to the verb 'mar' meaning to spoil, or the plural of the noun 'mar' meaning blemishes.
mars
. This is due to the
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reason
that
The planet and the god are written with uppercase. 'mars' refers to the verb 'mar' meaning to spoil, or the plural of the noun 'mar' meaning blemishes.
mars
is a hundred time less dense than earth and there is significant difference of
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tempertaure
at the
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Mars
.
Therefore
, either
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humans
will burn or freeze on the surface of
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Mars
. These claims
clearly
refute the writer's implication that
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life
could be possible on
The planet and the god are written with uppercase. 'mars' refers to the verb 'mar' meaning to spoil, or the plural of the noun 'mar' meaning blemishes.
mars
as
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mars
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supports
the microbes of the
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eath
.

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Ultimatelty
, the writer wraps up its argument by
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dclaring
that
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curosity
rover has found methane on
The planet and the god are written with uppercase. 'mars' refers to the verb 'mar' meaning to spoil, or the plural of the noun 'mar' meaning blemishes.
mars
and methane is valuable source to
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support
the
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life
. Not
surprisingly
, the lecturer takes an issue with that by contending that data collected from
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Curosity
rover is not accurate.
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Only
European research was accurate that indicated
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very
less amount of methane, which could not
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support
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life
.
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Furthmore
, after that methane presence was not confirmed.
Consequently
, this
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reason
is not persuasive too
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IELTS essay life on mars

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
351 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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