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Integrated writing task "Mary Celeste"

Integrated writing task " Mary Celeste" NrnEj
The professor in the lecture casts doubts on the three theories that are mentioned in the reading passage in regard to Mary Celeste ship, which is also called the "Ghost Ship" that was found abandoned, off the coast of Portugal in 1872. First of all, the professor contradicts the theory that is suggested in the reading passage of how a mutiny might have been aboard the ship, and had killed the captain and his family, and then throw them out of the boat. As according to the professor, the captain of the ship was known to be a revered man, who really had a good reputation. Therefore, such a t. . .
The professor in the lecture casts doubts on the three theories that
are mentioned
in the reading passage in regard to Mary Celeste
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ship
, which is
also
called the
Use a smart opening quote here: "“".
"
Ghost Ship
Use a smart closing quote here: "”".
"
that
was found
abandoned, off the coast of Portugal in 1872.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
, the professor contradicts the theory that
is suggested
in the reading passage of how a mutiny might have been aboard the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ship
, and had killed the captain and his family, and then throw them out of the boat. As according to the professor, the captain of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ship
was known
to be a revered
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
man
, who
really
had a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
reputation.
Therefore
, such a t.
Don't put a space before the full stop
.
Don't put a space before the full stop
.
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IELTS essay Integrated writing task " Mary Celeste"

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
112 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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