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In many places, new homes are needed but the only space available for building them is the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?

Building of houses is necessary in many countries, the land allotted for this construction can only be found in the countryside, some oppose this idea of development and believe that rural areas should be protected. In my opinion, I agree that surrounding areas of the city should be developed as it will not only improve the rural lifestyle but also benefit society. To begin with, constructing new houses in the countryside will utilize the non-cultivated lands as a useful resource. As income generated by this would be far more precious than the limited drawback it has. In other words, constructing new buildings in the outskirts will attract many individuals to invest and relocate themselves from the crowded cities, thus balancing the population density. Furthermore, this will promote necessary infrastructure like supermarkets, hospitals and educational institutions creating multiple business opportunities which benefit both individuals and the landlords. On the other hand, suburbs which are well developed with parks, gyms, play grounds and swimming pools will have a positive impact on the health of people. Citizens will utilize these amenities by participating in recreational activities and take advantage of the facilities provided, which is not conveniently available in urban area. For instance, in Hyderabad, ample of townships and gated communities are built in the outskirts, where the residents prefer spending their free time by taking advantage of these facilities. Therefore, providing healthy life and better living. In conclusion, building houses around the city is a must and town planners should consider this for overall development and tackle overcrowded in the city.
Building of
houses
is necessary in
many
countries, the land allotted for this construction can
only
be found
in the countryside,
some
oppose this
idea
of development and believe that rural areas should
be protected
. In my opinion, I
agree
that surrounding areas of the city should
be developed
as it will not
only
improve
the rural lifestyle
but
also
benefit society.

To
begin
with, constructing new
houses
in the countryside will utilize the non-cultivated lands as a useful resource.
As
income generated by this would be far more precious than the limited drawback it has.
In other words
, constructing new buildings in the outskirts will attract
many
individuals to invest and relocate themselves from the crowded
cities
,
thus
balancing the population density.
Furthermore
, this will promote necessary infrastructure like supermarkets, hospitals and educational institutions creating multiple business opportunities which benefit both individuals and the landlords.

On the other hand
, suburbs which are
well developed
with parks, gyms, play grounds and swimming pools will have a
positive
impact on the health of
people
. Citizens will utilize these amenities by participating in recreational activities and take advantage of the facilities provided, which is not
conveniently
available in urban area.
For instance
, in Hyderabad, ample of townships and gated communities
are built
in the outskirts, where the residents prefer spending their free time by taking advantage of these facilities.
Therefore
, providing healthy life and better living.

In conclusion
, building
houses
around the city is a
must
and town planners should consider this for
overall
development and tackle overcrowded in the city.
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IELTS essay In many places, new homes are needed but the only space available for building them is the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?

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259 words
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