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In many countries ,schools have severe problems with student behavior .what do you think are the cause for this? and what solutions can you suggest.

In many countries, schools have severe problems with student behavior. what do you think are the cause for this? and what solutions can you suggest. PxaJ
In many parts of the world, student discipline is becoming a major issue that teachers, parents, and school administrators have to deal with. This essay will first look at the reasons why this is happening, and then explore solutions for it. The primary reason for this increase in bad behaviour is the lack of respect for teachers in western society since the late twentieth century, which is partly due to the emphasis placed upon personal freedoms and individual rights. With massive cultural upheaval, the role of a teacher has diminished, and school pupils can run amok. Nowadays, teachers are powerless to stop their students from misbehaving in the classroom, and what is worse is that they are afraid of the consequences of being firm in their disciplinary procedures. When teachers are deemed to be too strict, parents will complain and it is possible that the teacher could lose their job. In order to solve this, great changes will need to be made. For a start, a teacher’s authority needs to be established, and this means making changes that reduce the likelihood of their position being questioned. From misbehaving pupils to unreasonable parents, there needs to be support for the teacher from above. This sort of institutional help has been missing for decades as education becomes more of a service industry wherein “the customer” is always right. Schools need to implement firm but fair rules that all pupils must abide by and there should be equally firm but fair punishments meted out accordingly. In conclusion, discipline problems are now common in many schools, and that is because teachersare no longer given the respect they are due. Schools and government authorities need to work to reinforce the importance of respecting teachers.
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parts of the world, student discipline is becoming a major issue that
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teachers
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school
administrators
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The primary reason for this increase in
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bad
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behaviour
is the lack of respect for
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teachers
in western society since the late twentieth century, which is partly due to the emphasis placed upon personal freedoms and individual rights. With massive cultural upheaval, the role of a
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teacher
has diminished, and
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school
pupils can run amok. Nowadays,
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teachers
are powerless to
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stop
their students from misbehaving in the classroom, and what is worse is that they are afraid of the consequences of being firm in their disciplinary procedures. When
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teachers
are deemed
to be too strict, parents will complain and it is possible that the
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teacher
could lose their job.

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changes
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be made
. For a
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. From misbehaving pupils to unreasonable parents, there
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needs
to be support for the
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teacher
from above. This sort of institutional
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help
has been missing for decades as education becomes more of a service industry wherein “the customer” is always right.
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need
to implement firm
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punishments meted out
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common in
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given
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government
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need
to work to reinforce the importance of respecting
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teachers
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IELTS essay In many countries, schools have severe problems with student behavior. what do you think are the cause for this? and what solutions can you suggest.

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