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In many countries people are live alone. What are the reason for it? Do you agree or disagree

A lot of countries people usually live alone because they like to privacy. I am going to disagree with those people who believe individuals are the best way. In my point of view, A lot of countries people usually live alone because they like to privacy. I am going to disagree with those people who believe individuals are the best way. In my point of view, A lot of countries people usually live alone because they like to privacy. I am going to disagree with those people who believe individuals are the best way. In my point of view,
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because
they like to privacy. I am going to disagree with those
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people
who believe individuals are the best way.

In my point of view,
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A lot of
countries
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
usually
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live
alone
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because
they like to privacy. I am going to disagree with those
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
who believe individuals are the best way.

In my point of view,

IELTS essay In many countries people are live alone. What are the reason for it?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
99 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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