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In many countries chilren are engaged in some kind of paid work

In many countries chilren are engaged in some kind of paid work KlKnR
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favour
of the sending the jewelry for work
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and others
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children
should
be enjoyed
their childhood
rather
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send
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Jewellers
for job in
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some
countries is it illegal this is
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against the law of which is a
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strictly ban
in the
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children
for job in the survey of
is conducted
in the 2011 one which set
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children
have active mind they do
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get
proper academic education
rather
than doing job the need to
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allow
for your jewelry for study for better future for the more and
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just
under age cannot handle work button
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some
studies
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come
our in front this is a
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dangerous
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for for
the child growth
for instance
work load child can have depression
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so
that for
further
development parents need to be
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allowed
to
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childrens
for enjoying this period
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so
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some
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some
up this discussion I will
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children
is a
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very
nice childhood is a
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very
precious time for growth and learn anything which can
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help
with there is a
further
more success
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IELTS essay In many countries chilren are engaged in some kind of paid work

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
191 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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