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In major cities around the world, traffic congestion has become a serious problem. How can this problem be tackled? Give reasons and examples from your own experience

In major cities around the world, traffic congestion has become a serious problem. How can this problem be tackled? Give reasons and examples from your own experience 562rD
Traffic congestion is an enormous issue for big urban cities in the whole world and it is directly affecting all individual's life who are living in these places. Even though this problem has a big magnitude, but still there are a few affordable solutions, like an improvement in the main road's infrastructure system and by the introduction of more public transport to the public. The essay will further discuss both facets of a proposal with appropriate examples and reaches a logical conclusion. To begin with, the most effective solution is an amelioration of roads and highways in big cities that can definitely help to mitigate the problem. Although, there are roads in every city, but making more tunnels and flyovers would reduce the traffic jams because people start using these facilities without hassles. For example, In Delhi the government solved 50% of the complication by constructing more roads and tunnels in the city. Additionally, there is one more significant solution available is providing a flexible public transportation system to the community. However, people are using their own transportation because some time there is no public transit available for them that compel them to buy their own vehicle, if the authority should make the public transit flexible and affordable for all of them then people would stop using private vehicles which could directly reduce the congestions. For instance, in Mumbai the council runs a more frequent service in the morning or evening, which puts the trivial impact on the travel amount of the city. In conclusion, unavailability of public transport and roads are the primary cause of this horrific trouble, so enhancement of these sectors could alleviate the issues. The government should spend more money in these areas, so people would not suffer more.
Traffic congestion is an enormous issue for
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big
urban cities in the whole world and it is
directly
affecting all
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individual's
life who are living in these places.
Even though
this problem has a
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big
magnitude,
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but
still
there are a few affordable solutions, like an improvement in the main road's infrastructure system and by the introduction of more
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public
transport to the
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public
. The essay will
further
discuss both facets of a proposal with appropriate examples and reaches a logical conclusion.

To
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begin
with, the most effective solution is an amelioration of
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roads
and highways in
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big
cities that can definitely
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help
to mitigate the problem. Although, there are
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roads
in every city,
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but
making more tunnels and flyovers would
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reduce
the traffic jams
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because
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people
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start
using these facilities without hassles.
For example
, In Delhi the
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government
solved 50% of the complication by constructing more
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roads
and tunnels in the city.

Additionally
, there is one more significant solution available is providing a flexible
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public
transportation system to the community.
However
,
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people
are using their
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own
transportation
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because
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some
time there is no
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public
transit available for them that compel them to
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buy
their
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own
vehicle, if the authority should
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make
the
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public
transit flexible and affordable for all of them then
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people
would
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stop
using private vehicles which could
directly
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reduce
the congestions.
For instance
, in Mumbai the council runs a more frequent service in the morning or evening, which puts the trivial impact on the travel amount of the city.

In conclusion
, unavailability of
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public
transport and
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roads
are the primary cause of this horrific trouble,
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so
enhancement of these sectors could alleviate the issues. The
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
should spend more money in these areas,
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so
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people
would not suffer more.
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IELTS essay In major cities around the world, traffic congestion has become a serious problem. How can this problem be tackled? Give reasons and examples from your own experience

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4 paragraphs
293 words
8.5
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