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In less developed countries are the disadvantages from tourism as great as the advantages?

In less developed countries are the disadvantages from tourism as great as the advantages? 2bPDb
The importance of tourism in developed countries which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while other reject this notion. This essay will further elaborate both aspects of this trend and this will lead to a logical conclusion. There are myriad of reason which further explain this argument but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that tourism is most predominant is developed countries as well as develop countries gained lots of profit of money to tourism. Another pivotal aspect for the argument is that tourism increase country economy and popularity. Needless to say, that all these merits stand tourism in developed countries in a good stead. However, there are some pitfalls that negate this argument and which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of this trend but the most alarming is that some tourists combating with citizens as well as some tourist break countries rules and policy. As an illustration some tourists ruin countries prosperity by spreading litter and become a cause of violence. It can be agreed that the upside of is instrumental indeed. However, it has some various drawbacks as well. Hence, it is apparent why many are against tourism in developed countries. According to the argument aforementioned above, one can reach a conclusion that the benefits of tourism in developed countries are instrumental indeed. Nevertheless, the potential drawbacks should not be overlooked either.
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as well
as develop
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gained lots of profit of money to
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increase
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economy and popularity. Needless to say, that all these merits stand
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tourists ruin
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prosperity by spreading litter and become a cause of violence. It can be
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agreed
that the upside of is instrumental
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various drawbacks
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are against
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tourism
in
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countries.

According to the
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argument
aforementioned above, one can reach a conclusion that the benefits of
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tourism
in
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developed
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countries
are instrumental
indeed
.
Nevertheless
, the potential drawbacks should not
be overlooked
either.
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IELTS essay In less developed countries are the disadvantages from tourism as great as the advantages?

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4 paragraphs
237 words
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