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In future, nobody will buy printed newspaper or books they will be able to read everything they want online without paying to what extend do you agree or disagree with statement?

In future, nobody will buy printed newspaper or books they will be able to read everything they want online without paying with statement? 9Llkw
In this technological world, internet has been changing many industries nowadays and it will have been happening in our future which can be seen by books and newspaper are changing into PDF files, DOC files and so on. In past generation, people had been reading the daily newspapers for know the current affairs within a day and there were plenty of newspapers, magazine companies in the last generation but we are not able to see them all because some companies are closed their business, even few companies have changed their production to the digital platforms, balance unstable companies have been struggling to increasing their production capacity and as well as they failed to attract the customers. A good illustration of this is E-newspappers and E- books are increasing day by day people are thinking we should move to online platform which is more convenient for them at the anytime anywhere they can read the desired books by using their mobile phones, tab and so on. when internet had created the revolution the impact was started from the moment and some important factors it is we don't want to pay for that. Some E-publishing companies have been offering their newspaper with free of cost as well as few messenger applications are using to release the paid version of the product but it is totally illegal. I would like to agree with the statement because our digital world is in our hand you can do anything as your wish by using the sophisticated technologies.
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by books and
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are changing into PDF files, DOC files and
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on. In past generation,
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had been reading the daily
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newspapers
for know the
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current
affairs within a day and there were
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newspapers
, magazine
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companies
in the last generation
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see
them all
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companies
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companies
have
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changed
their production to the digital platforms, balance unstable
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companies
have been struggling to increasing their production capacity and
as well
as they failed to attract the customers. A
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and E- books are increasing day by day
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people
are thinking we should
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move
to online platform which is more convenient for them at the anytime anywhere they can read the desired books by using their mobile phones, tab and
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so
on. when internet had created the revolution the impact was
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started
from the moment and
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some
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important
factors it is we don't want to pay for that.
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Some
E-publishing
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companies
have been offering their
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newspaper
with free of cost
as well
as few messenger applications are using to release the paid version of the product
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but
it is
totally
illegal. I would like to
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agree
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because
our digital world is in our hand you can do anything as your wish by using the sophisticated technologies.
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IELTS essay In future, nobody will buy printed newspaper or books they will be able to read everything they want online without paying with statement?

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  American English
1 paragraphs
252 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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