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In a few words, tell me about a close friend of yours.

In a few words, tell me about a close friend of yours. NWMeN
I’m going to talk about Ngoc Anh, who is one of my closest friends ever. We have been friends for 15 years since kindergarten. _I want to talk about Ngoc Anh for several reasons. _First, she is very kind. She’s willing to give the others a hand, and she always stands by me whenever I need help. Last year, I fell and was on crutches for almost a month. She came to my house to cook and clean my injury. _Second, 15 years of being friends together but we have never had an argument. Instead, there is only sympathy, sharing, and mutual understanding. We have a lot of similar interests so we often go shopping and drink coffee, . . . whenever we have free time. _Simple as that I’m so lucky to have a friend like her.
I’m going to talk about
Ngoc
Anh
, who is one of my closest
friends
ever. We have been
friends
for 15 years since kindergarten.

_I want to talk about
Ngoc
Anh
for several reasons.

_First, she is
very
kind. She’s willing to give the others a hand, and she always stands by me whenever I need
help
. Last year, I fell and was on crutches for almost a month. She came to my
house
to cook and clean my injury.

_Second, 15 years of being
friends
together
but
we have never had an argument.
Instead
, there is
only
sympathy, sharing, and mutual understanding. We have
a lot of
similar interests
so
we
often
go shopping and drink coffee
, .
.
.
whenever
we have free time.

_Simple as that I’m
so
lucky to have a
friend
like her.
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IELTS essay In a few words, tell me about a close friend of yours.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
138 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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