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government should pay for the course fees for everyone who wants to study at the university .to whAT extent do you agree or disagree.

government should pay for the course fees for everyone who wants to study at the university. 2qdA
It is irrefutable that government provides funds for university students in the form of scholarship, that is very beneficial for not only students but for the economy as well. On the contrary, it is detrimental in other ways and thus, I would consider it to be both a positive as well as a negative development. In the following paragraphs, I will argue both sides. Education plays an important role in the development of an economy. Every government-sponsored various scholarship schemes to enhance the enrollment of students in the universities. It is a welcome step as it fulfills the dream of many poor students who give up the idea of pursuing higher education due to financial constraints. On the other hand, parents need not worry about arranging funds for their child's higher studies. They can utilize their savings to increase their standard of living. Despite the benefits, I believe that the adverse repercussions of providing free education to university students cannot be ignored. The government has to bear the whole cost which eventually enhances the taxes. Ultimately, the people of the country have to pay more out of their income to increase the revenue of the government. Another reason for disagreement is students sometimes do not realize they need to concentrate more on their studies if they are getting it for free rather losing interest in studies. Many students give up their higher education and start doing jobs to earn their livelihood. Hence, it will affect badly the government's initiative to enhance the number of students getting a higher education. In Summary, I would like to reiterate that the government should provide free education to needy students, which definitely helps in improving levels of education in the country. But this initiative suffers from various disadvantages. However, the government can adopt such methods of providing free education that its advantages outweigh its disadvantages.
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provides funds for university
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students
in the form of scholarship,
that is
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very
beneficial for not
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only
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students
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but
for the economy
as well
.
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thus
, I would consider it to be both a
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positive
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as well as
a
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negative
development. In the following paragraphs, I will argue both sides.
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Education
plays an
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important
role in the development of an economy. Every
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government
-sponsored various scholarship schemes to enhance the enrollment of
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students
in the universities. It is a welcome step as it fulfills the dream of
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many
poor
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students
who give up the
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idea
of pursuing higher
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education
due to financial constraints.
On the other hand
, parents need not worry about arranging funds for their child's higher studies. They can utilize their savings to increase their standard of living. Despite the benefits, I believe that the adverse repercussions of providing
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free
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education
to university
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students
cannot be
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ignored
. The
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government
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has to
bear the whole cost which
eventually
enhances the taxes.
Ultimately
, the
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people
of the country
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have to
pay more out of their income to increase the revenue of the
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government
. Another reason for disagreement is
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students
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sometimes
do not realize they need to concentrate more on their studies if they are getting it for
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free
rather
losing interest in studies.
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Many
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students
give up their higher
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education
and
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start
doing jobs to earn their livelihood.
Hence
, it will affect
badly
the
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government
's initiative to enhance the number of
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students
getting a higher
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education
. In Summary, I would like to reiterate that the
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government
should provide
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free
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education
to needy
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students
, which definitely
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helps
in improving levels of
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education
in the country.
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But
this initiative suffers from various disadvantages.
However
, the
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government
can adopt such methods of providing
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free
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education
that its advantages outweigh its disadvantages.
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IELTS essay government should pay for the course fees for everyone who wants to study at the university.

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