All of us surrounded by lots of people. The condition is a little different for students, since, they are in relationship with their friends and teachers. Although both teachers and friends have pivotal impact on students, I do believe that the influence of friends are more than teachers.
First and foremost, students are in the same age with their friends or in close age and they have a lot in common. They spend most of the time of each day with their friend in school or even after school with each other. So, students are highly affected by their friends. For example, I have a ten-years old brother who is interested in soccer only because his friend is a professional soccer player and spend most of his time with him to learn soccer.
Another prominent reason is that, students like their friend and accept their opinion easily. It is a kind of principle that you accept some one' s speech easier if you like him/her. This principle comes true for students as well. For instance, I had a close friend when I was a college student whom I spend most of my time with and liked her too much. I trusted her in an unusual way and accepted all of her speeches. After a long time, I found that lots of her speaks were not true and she deceived me even about her family member.
Last but not least, teachers often appear as a person who teach students not as a friend whom they talk to easily and the subjects of their speaking usually are lesson-based. This issue causes students not to get familiar with their teachers and it makes the teacher' s role less important than other students.
In conclusion, even though, teachers have a prominent effect on student' s lives, friends play a more significant role. Friends have a lot in common with each other, students like their friends and accept their talks easily and teachers are not as close as friends to students
All of us surrounded by
lots
of
people
. The condition is a
little
different
for
students
, since, they are in relationship with their
friends
and
teachers
. Although both
teachers
and
friends
have pivotal impact on
students
, I do believe that the influence of
friends
are more than teachers.
First
and foremost,
students
are in the same age with their
friends
or in close
age and
they have a
lot
in common. They spend most of the
time
of each day with their
friend
in school or even after school with each other.
So
,
students
are
highly
affected
by their
friends
.
For example
, I have a ten-years
old
brother who
is interested
in soccer
only
because
his
friend
is a professional soccer player and spend most of his
time
with him to learn soccer.
Another prominent reason is that,
students
like their
friend
and accept their opinion
easily
. It is a kind of principle that you accept
some
one&
#039; s speech easier if you like him/her. This principle
comes
true for
students
as well
.
For instance
, I had a close
friend
when I was a college
student
whom I spend most of my
time
with and liked her too much. I trusted her
in an unusual way
and
accepted
all of her speeches. After a long
time
, I found that
lots
of her speaks were not
true and
she deceived me even about her family member.
Last
but
not least,
teachers
often
appear as a person who teach
students
not as a
friend
whom they talk to
easily
and the subjects of their speaking
usually
are lesson-based. This issue causes
students
not to
get
familiar with their
teachers
and it
makes
the
teacher&
#039; s role less
important
than other students.
In conclusion
,
even though
,
teachers
have a prominent effect on
student&
#039; s
lives
,
friends
play a more significant role.
Friends
have a
lot
in common with each other,
students
like their
friends
and accept their talks
easily
and
teachers
are not as close as
friends
to
students
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
41Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes