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Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful, others disagree. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.

Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful, others disagree. PaL2

Employees are asked about their personal details such as their hobbies, personal interest, and their marital status by employers while applying for jobs. Several people believe that providing the information is relevant while many vary with this. I agree with the statement, personal relationship affects a lot on companies progression and his colleagues. An individual who has a keen interest in sports may reflect that he can be a good team player and have leadership skills. he may also represent his institute in that sports. Hobbies and choice of interest reflect an individual's personality. Hiring an air hostess having young kids would not be beneficial for the company. As she needs to work in odd timing and may not be available for a couple of days. Marital status is also an important factor in a company's hiring. A single person would be available on weekends and would also work overtime while a married person would not be doing either of these due to their responsibilities. There are some incidents where a person is abused mentally or harassed due to their caste or race. Providing personal information may lead to this type of incident. Many a time a person is not able to secure a job due to their religion or their relationship status. To sum it up, personal information is relevant for employers but sometimes it may end up being in false hands.

Employees are asked
 about their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsecretintimatespecialparticular
personal
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
 such as their hobbies, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsecretintimatespecialparticular
personal
 interest, and their marital status by employers while applying for jobs. Several This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 believe that providing the information is relevant while This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 vary with this. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 with the statement, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsecretintimatespecialparticular
personal
 relationship affects a lot on This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisescorporations
companies
 progression and his colleagues.

An individual who has a keen interest in sports may reflect that he can be a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 team player and have leadership This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterHe
he
 may also
 represent his institute in that sports. Hobbies and choice of interest reflect an individual's personality.

Hiring an air hostess having young kids would not be beneficial for the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
. As she needs to work in odd timing and may not be available for a couple of days. Marital status is also
 an This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 factor in a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
's hiring. A single You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcustomerbodylifewomansomebodycharacter
person
 would be available on weekends and would also
 work overtime while a married You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcustomerbodylifewomansomebodycharacter
person
 would not be doing either of these due to their responsibilities.

There are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 incidents where a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcustomerbodylifewomansomebodycharacter
person
is abused
 mentally or harassed due to their caste or race. Providing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsecretintimatespecialparticular
personal
 information may lead to this type of incident. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
Many
 a time a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcustomerbodylifewomansomebodycharacter
person
 is not able to secure a job due to their religion or their relationship status.

To sum it up, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsecretintimatespecialparticular
personal
 information is relevant for employers This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
sometimes
 it may This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 up being in false hands. 