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If you could put up a new website on any topic at all, what would it be? Write about why you chose this topic, what the website would contain, and who else you think might be interested in going to your site.

If you could put up a new website on any topic at all, what would it be? Write about why you chose this topic, what the website would contain, and who else you think might be interested in going to your site. 15brN
If I could put a new website it will be about some important programms, and utilites for people. My website will be contain some useful information how to use these programms, and why I created them. I think people not only child should be interested in my site, but even perhaps elderly people like our parents, and more elderly. I always like to think about create something useful for people. From my point it will be good to create some new important and useful programs for them. If people boring with some annoyed games, or some programs maybe I should create something much better and useful than others. But I will think about it maybe in the future not now. I think that at nowadays we have several useful programs, games and etc.
If I could put a new website it will be about
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programms
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My website will be
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contain
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useful
information how to
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use
these
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programms
, and why

I created them. I
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think
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people
not
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child should
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in my site,
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even
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perhaps


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elderly
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people
like our parents, and more elderly.

I always like to
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think
about create something
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useful
for
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people
. From my point it will be
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good


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to
create
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new
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important
and
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useful
programs for them.

If
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people
boring with
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annoyed games, or
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programs maybe I should create

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something
much better and
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useful
than others.

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I will
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think
about it maybe in the future not
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now
.

I
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that at nowadays we have several
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programs, games
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IELTS essay If you could put up a new website on any topic at all, what would it be? Write about why you chose this topic, what the website would contain, and who else you think might be interested in going to your site.

Essay
  American English
10 paragraphs
133 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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