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Disadvantages of using computers

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Modern society is constantly developing, and the appearance of the Internet has opened up a whole new era of access and sharing of information. This brings a tremendous reform and benefits to all humanity. In our lives there are innumerable questions that need to be answered, and the Internet was born as a useful tool to help us solve those questions. Searching for information in the past has cost humanity a lot of time and effort, and not everyone had patience to turn the pages one by one to find the information they needed. However, our lives have changed tremendously since the arrival of the Internet, and the search of general information on the Internet has not consumed us much more than mouse clicks and keyboard typing. This is where most basic and specialist information is gathered from the majority of occupations and fields in our life. There are countless websites that contain useful information for research and study, and Wikipedia is now considered to be the most complete and accurate encyclopedia. Searching the Internet is simple, but we should also be careful in getting that information. Not all knowledge on the Internet is accurate and complete, so we need to compare information from many different sources before actually using any of them for our purposes. The Internet is an infinite ocean of knowledge, and we can learn countless things if we know how to use it properly.
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constantly
developing, and the appearance of the Internet has opened up a whole new era of access and sharing of
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information
. This brings a tremendous reform and benefits to all humanity. In our
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lives
there are innumerable questions that need to
be answered
, and the Internet
was born
as a useful tool to
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help
us solve those questions. Searching for
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information
in the past has cost humanity
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a lot of
time and effort, and not everyone had patience to turn the pages one by one to find the
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information
they needed.
However
, our
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lives
have
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changed
tremendously
since the arrival of the Internet, and the search of general
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information
on the Internet has not consumed us much more than mouse clicks and keyboard typing. This is where most basic and specialist
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
is gathered
from the majority of occupations and fields in our life. There are countless websites that contain useful
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information
for research and study, and Wikipedia is
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now
considered to be the most complete and accurate encyclopedia. Searching the Internet is simple,
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but
we should
also
be careful in getting that
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information
. Not all knowledge on the Internet is accurate and complete,
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so
we need to compare
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information
from
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many
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different
sources
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IELTS essay Disadvantages of using computers

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
238 words
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