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Describe a plan in your life which is not related to study or work.

Describe a plan in your life which is not related to study or work. 0naV1
Well, people always have some plans related to their work or study. I always keep on attending some short courses along with my regular studies to acquire new skills. For example, I have take classes of driving, music as well as French some time ago. But now I am planning to take cooking classes that I think I would need in near future. There are quite a few reasons why I want to opt for this course. The fact is that I am planning to move to Canada for my higher study very soon. Obviously, there would be no one to cook for me. For that reason, I really need to learn how to cook food so that I can survive in that new country. This way, I would be able to save myself from eating outside food all the time. As many of my friends are already in Canada and do not know how to cook food, they have to buy outside food which is certainly not only unhealthy but very expensive also. In addition, along with my study, I will be doing there some kind of part-time job as. So, if I know how to cook food I can easily find a job in a restaurant. Well, soon I will be having holidays and during this time I am going to take the help of my mother in learning this skill. She is a wonderful cook and can cook almost anything so learning this skill from her would also allow me to spend some extra time with her. Apart from this, there is an institute in my city that offer short cookery courses. Hence, I am planning to join this institute as well. So that I can learn most of the Punjabi cuisine along with some international ones. I am pretty sure I will enjoy taking cooking classes and I will learn it very quickly since I have a deep interest in cooking. Overall cooking is one skill that I am planning to learn in near future.
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plans related to their work or
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. I always
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keep
on attending
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some
short courses along with my regular
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studies
to acquire new
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skills
.
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, I have take classes of driving, music
as well
as French
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some
time ago.

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now
I am
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planning
to take cooking classes that I
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think
I would need in near future. There are quite a few reasons why I want to opt for this course.

The fact is that I am
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planning
to
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move
to Canada for my higher
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study
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very
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soon
.
Obviously
, there would be no one to cook for me. For that reason, I
really
need to
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learn
how to cook
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food
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so
that I can survive in that new country. This way, I would be able to save myself from eating outside
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food
all the time.

As
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many
of my friends are already in Canada and do not know how to cook
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food
, they
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have to
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buy
outside
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unhealthy
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very
expensive
also
.
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, along with my
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study
, I will be doing there
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kind of part-time job as.
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So, if
I know how to cook
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food
I can
easily
find a job in a restaurant.

Well,
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soon
I will be having holidays and during this time I am going to take the
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help
of my mother in learning this
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skill
. She is a wonderful cook and can cook almost anything
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so
learning this
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skill
from her would
also
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allow
me to spend
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some
extra time with her. Apart from this, there is an institute in my city that offer short cookery courses.
Hence
, I am
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planning
to
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join
this institute
as well
.

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So that
I can
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learn
most of the Punjabi cuisine along with
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some
international ones. I am pretty sure I will enjoy taking cooking classes and I will
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learn
it
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very
quickly
since I have a deep interest in cooking.

Overall
cooking is one
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skill
that I am
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planning
to
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learn
in near future.
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IELTS essay Describe a plan in your life which is not related to study or work.

Essay
  American English
7 paragraphs
339 words
5.5
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