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Declining Education Standard

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There is a widely held perception that the falling educational standard in literacy and numeracy areas is a great importance issue today. This essay will discuss the problem into solution then come to a reasoned conclusion. In the modern school a teacher only let out the students natural ability to learn on themselves. They only give some tasks and let the pupil to find out. This is an unhealthy education system which is the minimum interaction between teacher and student. It will affected to the students that they can override teacher advice and inattention of learning process. For instance, if the pupil can find out so many information by themselves from search engine without discuss it with their teacher. It should be some miss direction and lack of knowledge. Moreover, the communication between teacher and student should be build. Literacy and mathematics subject can be one of the example subject that will force their interaction. Therefore, these subject is important for the actives class. Such as literacy can build the sense of creativity and empathy then mathematics will increasing the level of analysis. Furthermore, these aptitude is valuable to use in daily life. While the school curriculum has made for students to facing the real world. It is good to train the pupil to be more carefully for the information that they got. In conclusion, modern education method should be maintain the interaction between student and teacher. Restore the literacy habit and mathematical analysis to practice their empathy must be build in their environment. However, parents, teacher and government must be work together because they are the most important elements to rise a better student.
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widely
held perception that the falling educational standard in
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literacy
and numeracy areas

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is
a great importance issue
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today
. This essay will discuss the problem into solution then
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come
to
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a


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reasoned
conclusion.

In the modern school a
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teacher
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only
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let
out the
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students
natural ability to learn on themselves. They

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only
give
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some
tasks and
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let
the pupil to find out. This is an unhealthy education system which is
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the


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minimum
interaction between
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teacher
and
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student
. It will
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affected
to the
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students
that they
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can


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override
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teacher
advice and inattention of learning process.
For instance
, if the pupil can find out
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so


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many information
by themselves from search engine without discuss it with their
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teacher
. It should
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be


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some
miss direction and lack of knowledge.

Moreover
, the communication between
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teacher
and
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student
should be build.
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Literacy
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and


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mathematics
subject can be one of the example subject that will force their interaction.
Therefore
,

these subject is
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important
for the actives
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class
. Such as
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literacy
can build the sense of creativity
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and


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empathy
then mathematics will
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increasing
the level of analysis.
Furthermore
,
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these aptitude
is

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valuable
to
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use
in daily life. While the school curriculum has made for
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students
to facing the
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real


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world
. It is
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good
to train the pupil to be more
carefully
for the information that they
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got
.

In conclusion
, modern education method should be
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maintain
the interaction between
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student
and

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teacher
. Restore the
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literacy
habit and mathematical analysis to practice their empathy
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must
be
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build


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in
their environment.
However
, parents,
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teacher
and
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government
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must
be work together
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they
are the most
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important
elements to rise a better
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student
.
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IELTS essay Declining Education Standard

Essay
  American English
19 paragraphs
275 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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