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Crime is a problem all over the world and therr is nothing all can be done to prevent.To what extent you agree or disagree?

Increasing crime rate is one of the mooted issue in many nations. it is argued by plethora of intellectuals that governing agencies should impose strict rules against criminals in order to control crime, However other believed in a opposite manner. This essay will discuss both the views and will explain some ways to mitigate such problem. To begin with, never ending desire and disparity in income are the main reasons for increasing crime in modern society therefore better job and education facilities may help in reducing Criminal activities.
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against criminals in order to control crime,
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ways to mitigate such problem. To
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with, never ending desire and disparity in income are the main reasons for increasing crime in modern society
therefore
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help
in reducing

Criminal activities.
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IELTS essay Crime is a problem all over the world and therr is nothing all can be done to prevent.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
88 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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