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Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome? Gq8g
It is undeniable that environmental issues have become the cruicial and worrisome problem throughout the world. It is to be considered that environmental pollution, inevitable population increase, and quality of education can become three of the most pressing issues that several countries would face in near future. In my opinion, our country(India) will definitely face problems related to the environment and abundance of population. In this essay, I will discuss about the aformentioned problems that I opine, and will throw a light on few of the solutions to these troubles. Firstly, production of substantial amount of trash on daily basis has made its management a near to impossible task and this has become the greatest threat to environment. Industrial chemical waste is disposed directly in to the water bodies, which turns water into a poisionous fluid. To illustrate, oil spills has become an unavoidable reason for endangering marine life. Moreover, plastic is an imperishable product and prominent cause of environmental pollution. For instance, plastic usage has crossed all of the limits throughout the world, according of recent studies, around 30% of total rubbish in the India is of plastic bottles. Industries should be penalized with huge fines, if they dispose any untreated and harmful leftovers to rivers. Recycling of plastic must be encouraged by providing public funding. Secondly, India is world's second most populated country and population of India is increasing abruptly year by year. The ampleness of population results in various other issues, such as, unemployment and deficiency of natural resources. For example, Indian government is already struggling to provide enough job opportunities for huge population and inflation is increasing because authorities are not able to fullfill the demand for even basic amenities such as food, water and sanitation. In conclusion, although most countries are facing environmental related issues these day, I would say the population would also become one of largest problem along with pollution in a country like India.
It is undeniable that
environmental
issues
have
become
the
cruicial
and worrisome
problem
throughout the world. It is to
be considered
that
environmental
pollution, inevitable
population
increase, and quality of education can
become
three of the most pressing
issues
that several
countries
would face in near future. In my opinion, our country(India) will definitely face
problems
related to the environment and abundance of
population
. In this essay, I will
discuss about the
aformentioned
problems
that I opine, and will throw a light on few of the solutions to these troubles.

Firstly
, production of substantial amount of trash on daily basis has made its management a near to impossible task and this has
become
the greatest threat to environment. Industrial chemical waste
is disposed
directly
in to the water bodies, which turns water into a
poisionous
fluid. To illustrate, oil spills has
become
an unavoidable reason for endangering marine life.
Moreover
,
plastic
is an imperishable product and prominent cause of
environmental
pollution.
For instance
,
plastic
usage has crossed
all of the
limits throughout the world,
according of
recent studies, around 30% of total rubbish in the India is of
plastic
bottles. Industries should
be penalized
with huge fines, if they dispose any untreated and harmful leftovers to rivers. Recycling of
plastic
must
be encouraged
by providing public funding.

Secondly
, India is world's second most populated
country
and
population
of India is increasing
abruptly
year by year. The
ampleness
of
population
results in various other
issues
, such as, unemployment and deficiency of natural resources.
For example
, Indian
government
is already struggling to provide
enough
job opportunities for huge
population
and inflation is increasing
because
authorities are not able to
fullfill
the demand for even basic amenities such as food, water and sanitation.

In conclusion
, although most
countries
are facing
environmental
related
issues
these day
, I would say the
population
would
also
become
one of
largest
problem
along with pollution in a
country
like India.
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IELTS essay Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome?

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