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chaco Canyon in New Mexico is distinguished for massive stones used in building it and many rooms it has. there are three stories about the usage of the place which none of them is completely undoubtable. First theory claims that many people residented in chaco since the rooms are quite similar to famous apartment building in Taos but the problem is the lack of enough fire places for living that many families in there, if there used to live 100 families as it capacitated, they would need many fire places for cooking but there existed just a few. The other theory says that chaco rooms were used as an storage to store food supplies, since the size of the rooms are suitable for this purpose and foods feel remain unspoiled for long time. However, if this was true, there should have remained some evidence of the maize or their containers in the rooms which is not. Thes last theory discusses that chaco may be used as place for special ceremonies because there have left many pots which people used to eat meals in them. Although, there have remained many other stuffs too such as construction tools which raises the possibility
chaco
Canyon in New Mexico
is distinguished
for massive stones
used
in building it and
many
rooms
it has.
there
are three stories about the usage of the
place
which none of them is completely
undoubtable
.

First
theory claims that
many
people
residented
in
chaco
since the
rooms
are quite similar to
famous
apartment building in
Taos
but
the problem is the lack of
enough
fire
places
for living that
many
families in there, if there
used
to
live
100 families as it
capacitated
, they would need
many
fire
places
for cooking
but
there existed
just
a few.

The other theory says that
chaco
rooms
were
used
as
an
storage to store food supplies, since the size of the
rooms
are suitable for this purpose and foods feel remain unspoiled for long time.
However
, if this was true, there should have remained
some
evidence of the maize or their containers in the
rooms
which is not.

Thes
last theory discusses that
chaco
may be
used
as
place
for special ceremonies
because
there have
left
many
pots which
people
used
to eat meals in them. Although, there have remained
many
other stuffs
too such
as construction tools which raises the possibility
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IELTS essay Chaco Canyon

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
199 words
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