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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 254 words.

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Now-a-days, the most popular activity is buying things on the Internet, namely books, air tickets and groceries. In my opinion, there will be more benifits of shopping in the which that more significant than the disadvantages. Buying things on the internet having many advantages such as we can do multiple works at a time without procastination of other works. Wasting of time will be low through internet shopping where works will be done as time lapse. We can buy more things at a time without carrying through out the way and things will be delivered at a particular time. All necessary precautions will be taken to deliver the ordered products. There will be more convinence of online shopping where customers can purchase items from the comfort of their own house or woek place or where ever need and what ever they want. Purchasing through internet not only time but also money as there will be offers on products and comparison between products can be done. On the contrary, online shopping also having few disadvantages where as, comparision among products wont be that much effective and appropriate. There will be often malpractices of products that may be damaged and moreover duplication of products will be encourged. Important and foremost drawbacks for online shopping is payment and security, sometimes there will be payment issues such as amount deduction and hacking of account details through payment details which comes under security issue. I conclude that, there are advantages and as well as disadvantages with online shopping, where, one should be conscious and should have experience in what they are doing and yes, in somecases, the advantages of shopping in this way greater the disadvantages.
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Now
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benifits
of
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shopping
in the which that more significant than the disadvantages.

Buying things on the internet having
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many
advantages such as we can do multiple works at a
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time
without
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procastination
of other works. Wasting of
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time
will be low
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through
internet
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shopping
where works will
be done
as
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time lapse
. We can
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buy
more things at a
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time
without carrying
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through out
the way and things will
be delivered
at a particular
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time
. All necessary precautions will
be taken
to deliver the ordered
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products
. There will be more
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convinence
of
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online
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shopping
where customers can
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purchase
items from the comfort of their
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own
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house
or
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place or where ever need and what ever they want. Purchasing
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through
internet not
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only
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time
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but
also
money as there will be offers on
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products
and comparison between
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products
can
be done
.

On the contrary
,
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online
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shopping
also
having few disadvantages
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where as
,
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comparision
among
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products
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wont
be that much effective and appropriate. There will be
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often
malpractices of
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products
that may
be damaged
and
moreover
duplication of
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products
will be
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encourged
.
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Important
and foremost drawbacks for
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online
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shopping
is payment and security,
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sometimes
there will be payment issues such as amount deduction and hacking of account
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details
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through
payment
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details
which
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comes
under security issue.

I conclude that, there are advantages and
as well
as disadvantages with
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online
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shopping
, where, one should be conscious and should have experience in what they are doing and yes, in
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somecases
, the advantages of
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shopping
in this way greater the disadvantages.
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IELTS essay Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
281 words
5.5
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