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An increasing number of people are now using dating sites to meet their second halves. Do you think that this tendency helps people to socialize or does more harm than good? Give your opinion. Provide relevant examples if necessary.

An increasing number of people are now using dating sites to meet their second halves. Do you think that this tendency helps people to socialize or does more harm than good? Give your opinion. Provide relevant examples if necessary. 218X

Nowadays, with the evolution of technology people prefer to communicate with the others through social medias. The busy live that most of people have make them to find a different way to know new people. Firstly, as I say above people want someone to pass their life but the hectic lifestyle where they are involve but let them to search for someone, so the easly way to find somebody by phone. Therefor, with the needy of communications people start to create programs which can provide online talking. on the other hand, some people try to abuse with those applications and benefits from people that are in needy. Also they can use fake identity and only to give you disappointment. However, my sister and her husband are knowing through social medias and now they have a baby boy. For my finding a person by applications or social media when you do not have opportunity is the best way. to sum up, on my opinions people that use date sides can also have goods and harmful thinks together but if you do not try you never would able to find your happy so i recommend to challenge themselves.

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people
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make
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but
 the hectic lifestyle where they are Consider using a past participle here: "involved".involved
involve
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but
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
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the needy of
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This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 to create programs which can provide online talking. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterOn
on
 the other hand, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 try to abuse with those applications and benefits from You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 that are in needy. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Also,
Also
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use
 fake identity and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 to give you disappointment. However
, my sister and her husband The verb 'knowing' is a stative verb and sometimes the progressive form is not correct. Try a simple form instead.
are knowing
 through social medias and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 they have a baby boy. For my finding a person by applications or social media when you do not have opportunity is the best way. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterTo
to
 sum up, on my opinions You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 date sides can also
 have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods
 and harmful This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonsassumesbelievesconsiders
thinks
 together This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 if you do not try you never Did you mean "would be able"?would be able
would able
 to find your happy This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
The verb 'recommend' is used with the gerund form: "recommend challenging".recommend challenging
recommend to challenge
 themselves. 