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Air traffic is increasingly leading to more noise, pollution and airport construction. One reason for this is the growth in low-cost passenger flights, often to holiday destinations. Some people say that governments should try to reduce air traffic by taxing it more heavily. Do you agree or disagree?

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Growth in budget airlines catering mostly to tourist destinations has fueled air traffic in recent times. Paradoxically, air traffic volume has also contributed to noise pollution and unplanned development. A section of society is concerned about the negative influence of growing air traffic and suggests regulations through heavy taxation. I believe such a step is a move in the wrong direction and strongly disagree with such opinion. Over the course of this essay I will provide reasons for such disagreement. On the contrary, heavy taxes will cause a rise in airfare and provide a death blow to budget airlines. This in turn will hurt local businesses and economy. First of all, aviation industry fuelled by growth of budget airlines has energised hospitality and tourism industry. Due to reduced airfare, more tourists travel to holiday destinations than ever before. This in turn has rejuvenated local economy as more high paying jobs get created in hospitality industry. For example, with more budget airlines flying to Bagdogra airport, economy of Sikkim has got a shot in the arm with arrival of record number of tourists. Secondly, increase in air traffic volume has necessitated either expansion of existing infrastructure or construction of new airports. Also new roads, flyovers have been built to improve connectivity. Consequently local economy has greatly benefitted from upgraded infrastructure. If budget airlines were to increase fare due to high taxes, tourist influx will reduce pushing local economy into recession. Instead smart urban planning is the need of the hour to control air traffic volume. New airports should be built outside the city limits with restrictions for residential development in and around new airports. For existing airports inside city limits, restriction on flight movement during late night and early morning will help to reduce air and noise pollution to a certain extent. Having considered a range of arguments, I have drawn the conclusion that aviation industry plays a vital role in boosting local economy and heavy taxation on airlines will deal a death blow to economy and jobs. Smart urban planning can control air and noise pollution to a great extent without hindering growth.
Growth in
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budget
airlines catering
mostly
to
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tourist
destinations has fueled
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air
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traffic
in recent times.
Paradoxically
,
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air
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traffic
volume has
also
contributed to noise pollution and unplanned development. A section of society
is concerned
about the
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negative
influence of growing
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air
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traffic
and suggests regulations through heavy taxation. I believe such a step is a
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move
in the
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wrong
direction and
strongly
disagree with such opinion. Over the course of this essay I will provide reasons for such disagreement.

On the contrary
, heavy taxes will cause a rise in airfare and provide a death blow to
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budget
airlines. This in turn will hurt
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local
businesses and
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economy
.
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First of all
, aviation
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industry
fuelled by growth of
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budget
airlines has
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energised
hospitality and tourism
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industry
. Due to
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reduced
airfare, more
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tourists
travel to holiday destinations than ever
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before
. This in turn has rejuvenated
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local
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economy
as more high paying jobs
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get
created in hospitality
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industry
.
For example
, with more
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budget
airlines flying to
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Bagdogra
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airport
,
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economy
of Sikkim has
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got
a shot in the arm with arrival of record number of
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tourists
.
Secondly
, increase in
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air
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traffic
volume has necessitated either expansion of existing infrastructure or construction of
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new
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airports
.
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Also
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new
roads, flyovers have
been built
to
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improve
connectivity.
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Consequently
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local
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economy
has
greatly
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benefitted
from upgraded infrastructure. If
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budget
airlines were to increase fare due to high taxes,
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tourist
influx will
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reduce
pushing
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local
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economy
into recession.

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Instead
smart urban planning is the need of the hour to control
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air
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traffic
volume.
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New
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airports
should
be built
outside the city limits with restrictions for residential development in and around
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new
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airports
. For existing
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airports
inside city limits, restriction on flight movement during late night and early morning will
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help
to
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reduce
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air
and noise pollution to a certain extent.

Having considered a range of arguments, I have drawn the conclusion that aviation
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industry
plays a vital role in boosting
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local
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economy
and heavy taxation on airlines will deal a death blow to
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economy
and jobs. Smart urban planning can control
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air
and noise pollution to a great extent without hindering growth.
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IELTS essay Air traffic is increasingly leading to more noise, pollution and airport construction. One reason for this is the growth in low-cost passenger flights, often to holiday destinations. Some people say that governments should try to reduce air traffic by taxing it more heavily.

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