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A person should never make an important decision alone

It is critically important that people make perfect decisions. I personally believe that a person must make his decision by himself. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay. To begin with, there is nobody who knows a person other than himself. There are family and friends around us, but we the only one who knows ourselves very well. My personal experience is a compelling illustration of this. Five years ago, I graduated from the UST university in the capital city of Yemen. My parents and friends wanted me to find a job and get married. However, I tried to explain to them how much I want to study for a master’s abroad. Moreover, I was about to make a choice that I do not like. Finally, I registered at the ESOGU university in Turkey. Furthermore, a person when he takes his decision by himself will feel responsible for his decision. For instance, when I started my master’s degree at ESOGU university, it was very hard for me to continue. The program was in the Turkish language and I couldn’t spend much time mastering the language. Therefore, I want to leave the university and go back to my country. however, I decided to continue my study no matter how hard it is, I am going to make it. Every time I feel that I am not able to graduate, I remember that I made the decision, and I am responsible for it. In the end, I could finish my master’s degree. In conclusion, I strongly feel that a person should make his decision by himself. This because no one knows what he wants better than himself, and a person who takes his decision on his own feels responsible to achieve it.
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this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.

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other than himself. There are family and friends around us,
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well. My personal experience is a compelling illustration of this. Five years ago, I graduated from the
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UST
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in the capital city of Yemen. My parents and friends wanted me to find a job and
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get
married.
However
, I tried to
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explain
to them how much I want to study for a master’s abroad.
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, I was about to
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a choice that I do not like.
Finally
, I registered at the
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ESOGU
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in Turkey.

Furthermore
, a
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when he takes his
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decision
by himself will
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responsible for his
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decision
.
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my master’s degree at
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, it was
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for me to continue. The program was in the Turkish language and I couldn’t spend much time mastering the language.
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, I want to
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however
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it is, I am going to
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it. Every time I
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that I am not able to graduate, I remember that I made the
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decision
, and I am responsible for it. In the
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end
, I could finish my master’s degree.

In conclusion
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person
should
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his
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by himself. This
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no one knows what he wants better than himself, and a
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person
who takes his
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own
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feels
responsible to achieve it.
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IELTS essay A person should never make an important decision alone

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
298 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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