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58. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Businesses should do anything they can to make a profit. Use specific reasons and examples to support your position. Disagree

58. Businesses should do anything they can to make a profit. Use specific reasons and examples to support your position. Disagree XGoyN
58. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Businesses should do anything they can to make a profit. Use specific reasons and examples to support your position. Disagree 1) Should not break the law 2) Should not damage customers' benefits 59. Some people are always in a hurry to go places and get things done. Other people prefer to take their time and live life at a slower pace. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer Choose the first one: In a hurry and get things done. 1) Time is limited in everyone's life; 2) After getting things done, we do not need to worry about it anymore and we can enjoy the life better. 60. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Games are as important for adults as they are for children. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer Agree: 1) Need some way to release the pressure; 2) Game? ? ? team work 3) Game means competition
58. Do you
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agree
or disagree with the following statement? Businesses should do anything they can to
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make
a profit.
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Use
specific reasons and examples to support your position.

Disagree

1) Should not break the law

2) Should not damage customers' benefits

59.
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people
are always in a hurry to go places and
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get
things done. Other
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people
prefer to take their time and
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live
life at a slower pace. Which do you prefer?
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Use
specific reasons and examples to support your
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answer


Choose the
first
one: In a hurry and
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get
things done.

1) Time
is limited
in everyone's life;

2) After getting things done, we do not need to worry about it
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
anymore and
we can enjoy the life better.

60. Do you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
or disagree with the following statement? Games are as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
for adults as they are for children.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Use
specific reasons and examples to support your
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
answer


This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Agree
:

1) Need
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some
way to release the pressure;

2) Game? ? ?
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team
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work


3) Game means competition
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IELTS essay 58. Businesses should do anything they can to make a profit. Use specific reasons and examples to support your position. Disagree

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  American English
13 paragraphs
171 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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