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2 Maps: Islip town center now and in the future

2 Maps: Islip town center now and in the future V0gRJ
The two maps show that the development planned of the islip and this town current depict. According to the figures, plenty of change will be happen in the small town centre. present town center have no dual caariageway and bus station and car park but after development this facility will be added in this city. it clearly seen that, huge numbers of changing will be occur in the city after development. in addition, plenty numbers of new building added, bus station and car parking also added after development. more over, dual carriageway will be affix south west side in the town, along with some new house will build up near the park side and near by cark park side.
The two maps
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that the development planned of the
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islip
and this
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town
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current
depict.

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plenty
of
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change
will be
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happen
in the
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small
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town
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centre
.

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present
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town
center have no dual
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caariageway
and bus station and car park
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but
after development this facility will be
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added
in this city.

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it
clearly
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seen
that, huge numbers of changing will be
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occur
in the city after development.

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in
addition,
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plenty
numbers of new building
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added
, bus station and car parking
also
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added
after development.

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more
over, dual carriageway will be affix
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south west
side in the
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town
, along with
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some
new
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house
will build up near the park side and
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near by
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cark
park side.
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IELTS essay 2 Maps: Islip town center now and in the future

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
119 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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